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Chapter 218: Don't Let the Flap Hit You On the Way Out

🕑 Added 2023-02-16 06:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Lou Gar

Hmmm, I am a bit worried about the relationship between Tori and Piers. He is entirely emotionally dependent on her, to the point of subservience. That's... really not good. It was stated way back when, that "in the Delta her word is law." However, when he acts like a ruler of the empire (bringing in the other prince) - he is punished, and ends up bribing her with geothermal springs to get back on her good will. My opinion is that there should have been a discussion, instead of abrupt... well, see the tile of this chapter. Or, am I wrong.

SiriB

It'll probably end up being one of those "I need a break after that break." kind of things.

noëlle

I shudder to think what Tori considers a “break.”


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