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The Saga of Bjorn!

🕑 Added 2026-01-25 21:31:13 +0000 UTC

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bcdp

Yeah, like I said, I am aware that tastes differ. Kudos to you for being able to piece it together and having fun doing so. I wasn't able to, so for me it would have meant what "a passing Fnord" mentioned: copy&pasting the verses in order, basically creating the version we see here. It's why I mentioned the edited version of Mnemento.

Selkie

I assume that’s how the person who compiled it copy pasted

Selkie

No, but Maeve and Bjorn don’t exactly make a happy family do they?

a passing Fnord

Given that the motivation given by Bjorn in the Saga for his attack on Dublin is vengeance for his mother's treatment, and that Erik has said that out of the whole coven, only Vivian has a "whole and happy" family; does that mean that he intends to one day kill his father for what was done to his mother? Like father, like son.

a passing Fnord

I would have preferred to have more of the Chronicler's pieces mixed in between the verses of the Saga. I liked that they helped give context without having to do info dumps in the main narrative. Also, about 2 thirds of the way through the publishing of the Saga, I started to copy the verses over to a notepad to just read the whole thing in order later. I did like it overall, but I also agree that there was some tonal mismatch that could take some people out of it. It might have been better to present mixed in with other pieces so that each had relevance to the chapter (or at least matched in tone) , whether a Saga verse, or other pieces. Or just have it be shorter so that people don't lose patience with the Saga partway through. There may be more leeway with that when reading all the chapters in order now that it is all out. I guess I'll see how it flows when I eventually decide to do a re-read binge.

Sparifankerl

Three observations / questions: 1. What's up with the formatting change? Up to verse 5 it's more prose than verse and only from verse 13 do the double-line breaks (aka the many empty lines) disappear. Is that supposed to tell us something or is that just not fully edited yet? 2. It's a propaganda piece and yet Bjorn doesn't feel compelled to whitewash the rape and mindfuckery of Maeve Morsin. Similarly, the forced marriage of Alena Hollowfern isn't being whitewashed. This is such a blatant threat, no wonder everyone else is wary of the Morsins. I'm more surprised that Erik has become such a decent lad. 3. Someone should make this a filk!

Digdug

I enjoyed these. Brojn is not a good man but good leaders never are. We don't know the full history but it sounds like he has brought more betterment then harm too the world.

DeadicatedReader

I'm very happy to finally see the full thing. Brutal

Mire

I will offer a counterpoint to some of the more critical comments I saw in this thread and say that I liked how these were woven into the story. I found it interesting to piece together what Bjorn and the dark civil war were over the course of many chapters. I definitely wasn't cheering for him though. The brutality of war is one thing, but his wonton cruelty, and especially the mind-rape/literal rape of Maeve make him pretty irrideamable in my book. I assume he's going to be a series antagonist though, so his evil isn't really a bad thing for the narrative. One thing I do agree with other comments on is that it is pretty disconnected from the story we're actually reading. I suspect these would have worked better if Eric had been the main character, but with the main POV shifting to Felix, they can feel a bit random. I also think the tone of these could have been managed a bit better; some of the darkest Saga verses were paired with relaxing/comedic chapters, which was quite disonnant to read. That said, I did overall like the mystery, and would welcome more similarly structured verses in the future, maybe from stories more directly tied in with our leads and the school.

Nait02

I think we saw her in the introductory Erik POV

Stephanie Washburn

I've got no context at all where this comes from. But honestly the crew seem like truly terrible people who I have absolutely no sympathy for.

bcdp

To be honest, the leading verses didn't work for me. The disruption you mentioned and the - to me - randomness made them feel irrelevant to me at the start. I had no context for them and so after two more chapters couldn't recall what the first had said. Despite of that I gave it a try and tried to keep up with them. After about 20 chapters I gave up and skipped them completely. While by then I had enough context to know what they were about, they still disrupted the flow of the main story and they themselves were still too hard to follow. I understand that everyone's tastes are different, but I rather enjoy the story than solve a puzzle. It's not unlike the movie mnemento. It's art that I respect, but rather watch in the edited version where everything is in normal timeline. Disclaimer: I am usually not a fan of such headers, for the abovementioned disruption. But I have read stories where it worked for me, too. Usually the shorter the better. I don't mind 2-3 liners at all. But I also read a story where "pages" from relevant (in-story) books were quoted. And while they even had strong relevance to the chapter, it just took me out of the story.

Lena

Huh. You have to wonder how much of this is true and how much is exaggeration. Also why Erik has never mentioned his sister.


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