Katnay patreon

Closing Time [53 - 60]

🕑 Added 2025-04-25 20:40:03 +0000 UTC

Comments

Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez

Well, yeah, that's actually more or less what I was aiming to hint at with this last part. To make the conflict between the groups a little more believable. Though it wasn’t the plan from the beginning, it happened spontaneously as I was writing it after the Lil “Diana hit by a car” joke. ^^

Morlund

In stark contrast to my last comment, Dimitri basically being the circus's guardian angel during potentially dangerous late nights performing in the street combined with his attitude here made me think more and more that if it wasn't for the whole 'hit by a car' misunderstanding, there's a distinct possibility he might've been worried that the band were something like sex traffickers after Diana...and there's a distinct possibility that might've actually been the case before he had the car thing confirmed, especially with his rather pointed line of 'and what do you want with the lady?!' in response to RJ's rather poorly worded line of 'look buddy we're just here for her' which is a rather ominous first thing to say to a stranger about wanting someone in their group to the point that it could be interpreted as something that a kidnapper would say...and combined with Lil's panic over Diana being a pretty girl alone out in the streets at night...and in her panic she might've raised concerns over other things besides Diana being hit by a car if Lil wasn't so stoned...anyway that's the only conclusion I can come to based on all the evidence, so maybe Dimitri's standoffish attitude might've not been entirely unwarranted even if it wasn't for the car misunderstanding, and this could be a subtle way of the comic dealing with more heavy subjects regardless of whether that was your intention. ;P

Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez

Lmao, yeah it was a rough start. Dimitri can be a bit hotheaded sometimes, but he has his reasons though. So now we can see where does these meeting takes up

Morlund

Geez, I didn't expect the WDC's & Bohemians' first meeting to be so chaotic and confrontational! Tho at least it happens believably and not just contrived for the sake of drama, with Dimitri understandably being protective of Sylvie's new friend due to thinking the newcomers hit her with a car (there's that running gag again!) and the B3 boneheadedly escalating things, both of which sound very in-character. :D Also no surprise that Dominique is the only one who can reign Dimitri in...maybe one day dad friend RJ will get the chance to do the same with the B3. XD Now that things have cooled down hopefully there'll be better relations between the band & circus going forward, especially once Diana officially gets together with Sylvie (& co...?) ^_^

Juan Daniel Campos Hernandez

Thank you, the nodding is actually one of the things that worried me that it wouldn't be clear what she's doing so I'm glad to see it was lol

Ssemodnar sgod

I think it's an innate sense from all us Latinos of always wanting to start a fight at the minor inconvenience, I think it's quite funny lol. This batch has so many things going on that I don't know which one I like the most XD, from R.J and Zara's reaction from being called a couple before it becomes "canon" to how you drew Diana banging her head to say "yes"... If I wanted to say what I love of every single detail I would write an essay, so I'll just say: I LOVED THIS ^^