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Early release: The Toy's Toy, Epilogue

🕑 Added 2025-02-02 03:43:04 +0000 UTC

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Ice Bear

Thanks! It's pretty different from what I usually do, so I'm glad it worked out for you in the end.

Balseraph

Yeah... that was a good and satisfying epilogue, to what had started as one of my *least* favorite of your stories. Thank you for writing it.

WDB

And I didn't even have to hold in three hours worth of piss to get to the very end, unlike Return of the King! (Seriously, one of the worst movie-going experiences of my adult life. END THE FUCKING FILM, YOU GODDAMN KIWI.) Riotously funny, just like always, and as unpredictable as ever. Devon's caustic asides always crack me up, her little self-deprecations and casual monstrosity against genders/professions/species. But the extra dash of fun to The Toy's Toy is the bizarre avenues the narrative travels down in pursuit of Devon's happy ending -- like, I guess she's the Gal In The Chair for mercenaries now? That's where we ended up from a tale that kicks off in a suburban home? I love it. Devon's story could've ended last chapter, but I'm glad we got this extended epilogue to solidify both her personal growth and eternal terribleness. Excellent, excellent stuff.

WDB

When you get Devon on Page 1 saying "Classic God" as a way of summing up some biblical smiting, you know you are in for a good time.


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