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Commission: "The Line of Magnolia"

🕑 Added 2024-03-26 22:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Orifalcon

Interesting start. Could have done without the splattered viscera, but can't win em all.

WDB

I feel like I'm always commenting on these fantasy stories by prefacing with I'm Not A Fantasy Guy, and then spending a couple paragraphs saying how well this fantasy story worked for me. Get ready for more of that. I admit that the first page or so... not my thing. It's very agreeable fantasy prose, but it's still fantasy prose, and my brain sort of shifts into Neutral for that stuff. But! Everything after that was hot and funny, with a nice layer of dark mystery. Some sexy unwillingly willing sex scenes, and a bitchy queen to lust over. Hard to not enjoy that, no matter the genre. This was not only a fun read, but one I'd like to see continued. BUT I'M NOT A FANTASY GUYYYYYYYYY

WDB

Looks like SOMEONE had fun storming the castle, if you catch my drift...


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