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RLP 3: Oops, Summoned a Demon, Conclusion

🕑 Added 2022-05-08 05:46:22 +0000 UTC

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WDB

This was a terrific conclusion to what will hopefully not be the last installment of the Rachel's Love Potion franchise. (Rachel's heartfelt appeal for Knox to enjoy what he has was really beautiful, but: no. No, we can't let the most ridiculous Harem Building story I've ever read stop off at a mere *three* exquisitely gorgeous sex slaves. You can't even call one of them "nubile", so, like, think of the readers!) I can't believe how good it felt to see Knox fully own his friendship with Rachel. It took a whole lot of pages -- and a whole bunch of hilarious denials from Knox -- but the journey to get here makes the prize feel fully earned. The sweetness is still tempered by inescapable good-natured humiliation and control, providing a unique landscape to explore how safety and vulnerability are both necessary for true happiness. I really love this series. Thanks for improving it with every installment!

WDB

All Ice Bear stories are now secretly about the value of dog ownership, and I'm cool with it.

ZeroCross

Great ending. Love it. I hope you get around to a fourth installment. Lynne is the right amount of annoying that I'd enjoy her comeuppance. I feel that Knox and Rachel evolved enough that I haven't tired of them, and I'd actually love to see them deal with an helpfulness potion.


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