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The Toy's Toy, Ch. 5

🕑 Added 2022-11-06 22:35:46 +0000 UTC

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WDB

A top-to-bottom (and top and bottom) evangelical evisceration from Devon, and it's the exact other end of the spectrum from Lacey while *also* being one of my favorite things you've ever written. This was hot (all of the weaponized flirty innocence), clever (methodical deconstruction of an entire support system via hypocrisy), and *fucking hilarious* (the Helen stuff ALONE). I cannot believe you've leveraged a religious upbringing to write such a scathing, ruthless takedown of jokey youth pastors, would-be-saint shopkeepers, prissy self-denying teenagers, and power-abusing church leaders. Shit, even the *Roomba* ends up looking like an asshole. Absolutely brilliant in its Scorched Earth commentary. I'm in awe!

WDB

"Trying not to notice the painting of some guy with a gross hat nailed to a stick behind him. "Super turnoffy."


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