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Rachel's Love Potion 2: Part 5
🕑 Added 2020-02-26 22:58:12 +0000 UTCHere we go, folks! The fifth and final portion of Rachel's Love Potion 2: Rachel's Love Potion's Love Potion.
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OK. So I *will* be continuing this, but it may be a bit. Since we've hit sort of a major twist, this seemed like a good place to bookmark things and be easier to come back to. Props if you saw it coming. :) I tried to plant a few seeds to show the changes weren't only physical and behavioral. I have the opening portion sketched out, at least, so if it takes me a few months I won't forget (or have to re-read the whole saga to get a handle on things). My working title for now is: "Oops! Rachel Summons a Demon", and I think we can have some fun with it.
As for other projects, I am almost done editing The Gamemaster's Screen (much improved in revision, I am happy to say), and then I have the February commission drawing story to complete (and probably March after that). Then I am back to my list of ideas I've had on the back-burner, and I really do still want to finish Living the Dream, which I was having a heck of a fun time with before Rachel distracted me.
More to come!
Comments
ukyo_rulz
Nicely done. I really liked how this chapter sort of revisited Knox as the protagonist, and as it turns out he did go through some character growth after all. His main defining characteristics, narcissism, perversion and laziness, are still very much front and center but he’s got just the tiniest sliver of fondness for his girls in there. Looking back on the story as a whole, Rachel also did a lot of growing, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Really excited to see how her story goes from here. I do have one complaint - that Joanna ended up losing quite a bit of her character in the end. A pity because when she came onto the scene she was a huge contrast to Rachel and I felt she had a lot of potential to spice up the group relationship dynamics. She started out having a stronger personality than Rachel but near the end all I saw from her was mewling subservience. She basically became another Rachel, but without the humorous dialogue. I wish the story had played up her inner conflict more. She’s supposed to really hate Knox but also be really horny for him, but I only know this because the story told me so through Knox’s inner thoughts. Would have been nicer if this was shown more through her actions. It’s really not much of a conflict at all if all she can do is raise a token objection before Knox overrules her.
WDB
A barnburner of a conclusion! Super fun to get Knox's perspective on the last few chapters, and I'm glad to see that Rachel's shenanigans have now reached *interdimensional* in scope. God bless these weirdos, and the way their sexual depravities could maybe coalesce into real friendship. This fucking story! I love it.
