Oopsie
🕑 Added 2019-01-11 20:11:54 +0000 UTCThat's the name of the story, not me apologizing for anything. This is the belated December monthly commission drawing (and props to the drawing winner for being so patient!).
I often compare writing on commission to doodling with crayons. Sometimes, you've got the lines all sketched out for you in the coloring book and you just pick a crayon color and fill it in. Other times, you've got a blank sheet of paper and the a world of possibility. Both have their fun sides. Usually, when people commission a story, I get the first one. The commissions aren't cheap, so people want to get what they want. They tend to be pretty specific - scene by scene walk-through, character names, descriptions, do's and don'ts. (Which is fine!)
This time around, the request was, if I may quote the drawing winner: "something with bimbos and a twist ending."
Ladies and gentlemen... I give you: Oopsie.
Going forward, I have one more commission I'm doing before beginning TIOS 3, and then I'll be doing kind of a chapter/commission back and forth until I get caught up. More to come!
Comments
Ice Bear
Yeah, I try to keep character indictments of MCers from being over themes, but with a request for a twist, I thought it'd be fun to give a jerk his comeuppance. :D
WDB
Additionally, I'm not really big on bimbo transformation stories (not my kink), but it turns out I *am* big on bimbo transformation stories that are a stealth indictment of the ways men patronize and objectify attractive women. So, more of that, please.
WDB
Ha ha ha, fantastic.
JoeForest
Oh damn - loved the story, and that twist ending really knocked me for something. Great work!