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Commission: The Understudy
🕑 Added 2020-12-10 20:48:09 +0000 UTCHere we are folks, a new piece for ya. This was kind of a weird challenge, but super fun. The individual requesting it said they didn't want a story with mind control in it. Now I wouldn't say this is *entirely* outside my wheelhouse, but... well, I'll let you judge the results for yourselves. Enjoy!
In the meantime, I'll probably have a little more fun with Grand Prize Game, then I think next on the chopping block is Losers. I'll have to do some re-reading, rethinking, because man that story took a seriously fucked up headspace. Still, I think Chanda needs some resolution, and I know I do. I have other commissions in the works, too, so we got all kinds of fun yet coming up this month. In the meantime, be well, be happy, and more to come!
Comments
Ferrum1
That was a fun ride. I agree with WDB in that it wasn't not a mind control story. While you don't say what's going on, something is certainly going on, at least in my mind. What happened on that overseas trip? Magic lamps or ancient relics? Could be. Reminds me of an older MC story called "Talked themselves into it" where the new boss doesn't say anything, and certainly doesn't have any overt powers. He's amazed at how the women on his staff become sluttier and sluttier, and nothing he says can seem to stop them. Overall, two thumbs up. And I'm very much looking forward to seeing what's going on in Losers. There are at least 20 chapters worth of writing there as we explore the world and see how our protagonists get along in their new lives.
Ice Bear
Yeah, I tried to have at least a modicum of realism to it. Acting like you know what you're doing really can pull people into the illusion. Not *this* far, but... well, the realistic version would be hella boring.
Love the alpha male story. Honestly how a lot of people react to overwhelming confidence
