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Teaching Her A Lesson 4, early release
🕑 Added 2020-06-21 06:41:04 +0000 UTCThe good times keep on a'rolling. First off, recommend you read first, return for my rambling commentary later. That said, I hope you're all still having fun with this meandering monster of a tail. I will confess, I have done a lot less foreplanning on this thing. It's not stream of consciousness, quite. I feel like letting myself occupy the head of Mr. Canon as he ineptly flails along, coupled with letting my writerly self chime in now and again to make things more interesting for him is working for me, though. The more he doesn't know what he's doing, the more he keeps letting things spiral more and more out of control. Except for those things (or rather, people), who are very much under control.
Now I know some folks are going to be miffed I didn't list out explicitly all of Abbie's commands, but trust me, she's got some things in the works that will be more fun as surprises. I did make sure to include a few, noted early on for the most part.
In the meantime, I don't plan on letting up the pace on this sucker any time soon - having way too much fun, and frankly, if Mr. Canon doesn't get laid soon, my balls might explode right along with his. I'm rooting for him. Kind of. More to come!
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Ice Bear
You and Mr. Canon both! :D
Hidden
Nice story. Hope to some action since we are 4 chapters in
HardhatDoozer
I think we are a couple of chapters from discovering who Taylor really is. I think Abbie is as straightforward as she seems. And there are probably just some small revelations to come about Candy and Isa. But Taylor is a big mystery. What is she truly like under all of that bluster? Hard to say but I hope we find out.
I'm quite enjoying this one, too. I like that what started out looking like an MC controlling one target is quickly spiraling wider and wider. I look forward to seeing where it's going, as clearly it's already gone differently than I expected. :)
