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Character Creation Ch. 4 early release & Tolerance
🕑 Added 2016-04-18 11:59:01 +0000 UTC Here's the initial draft of Character Creation Ch. 4: The Gem of Projected Guises. This one hinges on another custom item, similar to the hat of disguise, but using the Disguise Other spell instead. Forewarning, it's pretty gradual and isn't the most sexually explicit story I've written. I still kinda like it though. Feel free to share thoughts or feedback.Also, a couple notes on The Tolerant - I did do some small re-working of the last chapter (with Brittney and Emily) in the "official" post to the EMCSA, so if you didn't re-read and are a follower of the series, it may be worth it, at least the final few paragraphs. I wasn't happy with the tone - I liked that it was more upbeat, but I felt like it was a bit too upbeat for someone in Emily's shoes, so I left Brittney as the beacon of hope and tried to let Emily be who she is a bit more. Not necessarily crucial, but I thought it made it less forced in terms of Emily's sudden hopefulness.
More to come!
