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The Chill Pill Ch. 02, early release
🕑 Added 2017-04-15 08:36:08 +0000 UTC So I officially updated the name to The Chill Pill. Oh, and I also wrote another 5k words or so. Ch 01 was heavy on exposition, so for this one I wanted to ramp up the good stuff. (And really, our protagonist is only human - he can only hold off abusing his invention for so long.) Enjoy!Comments
Dorian Alton
I like that you're exploring limited 'Free Use' again. Once more, it seems limited to a single controller, as it was in Tolerance/The Tolerant, which is probably the best way to go for this type of narrative. The scenes themselves are pretty hot, though I'm not much of a fan of the revenge concept. I do like that the chemical seems keyed to Sean, so that serial via the ladies is possible. I also like that it doesn't seem like this will go into the same dark themes that The Tolerant. Overall, looking forward to reading more.
