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Chapter 17 - Bull's Eye Views

🕑 Added 2025-03-01 00:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Tinto

Love that vampire comparison. And yes, Phil's casual response vs how Shiloh's husband must feel as he listens, was hot to write too

Bareslut

Shiloh's pleading with Phill to "Tell me you love me" is like a dagger to the heart...followed by an injection of adrenaline. Is Shiloh doing it "just" for her husbands sake? I doubt it. It is so erotic and painful when the wife starts to have feelings for the Bull. Not full blown Lily leaves Vaughn type of feeling....but some heartstrings that become attached to the Bull. You don't experience that with all the men in Traders. But with Tinto's hotwives, it reminds me of Vampire stories where there is almost a mystical ( demonic?) connection to the one that turned them. For hub to experience that AND then see how Phil just ignores the begging and pleading....such a deep level of humiliation and emasculation. Super HAWT!

Tinto

Hi Giancarlo, I'm glad you enjoyed the latest chapter. There will indeed be more appearances from Spens and Grace as we go forward. Although there's a lot to fit in! The sheer number of characters probably produces the 'Slower build-up' you mention. It's inevitable in some ways, because there are so many couples waiting in line for their weekly turn to update their story. But hopefully, as you say, it does make everything a little more believable. It can be a bit of a balancing act to avoid reader frustration, with some events feeling like they take a long time to progress. I know what you mean about stories where the wife surrenders to absolutely everything overnight though. It was always one of my pet hates as a reader in this genre.

Giancarlo

The biggest thing I took from this chapter is how much I want to hear more about Spencer and Grace again. I remember their story was (still is) very entertaining to read. I like how one of the other characters mention at least once how she resembles Scarjo. Makes the imagination that much sweeter. I hope you do write more about them in the near future. I do appreciate the slow buildup to having Gracie join Traders. It gives it a bit more realistic touch making the story more enticing. Just because she enjoys having sex with other men in front of Spencer, doesn’t mean she’ll start working at Traders the day after. Although I can’t wait til that day comes! I also appreciate the even slower buildup of Rachel, not only coming back to Traders, but teaming up with her mother too. I feel like it’s been ages since we’ve heard of the idea and it always feels like it’s just around the corner from happening. And yet, we’re still stuck in the “will they, won’t they,” phase in the story. Again, this touch of realism makes the story even more enticing. It’s a smart move to make both mother and daughter very reluctant to do so, because, hey, who wouldn’t be? lol I don’t like stories where one day the wife is a faithful, respected, dutiful partner and then literally the next day she is a slut wife who can’t get enough sex. The buildup is essential. I do agree that Lanie’s progress is another slow process. I honestly have no idea where her story is heading specifically. But in that way in keeps me invested to see how it all plays out. Excellent job on another great chapter, Tinto!


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