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Black Marks 4 - Chapter Three

🕑 Added 2025-02-22 00:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Tinto

Hi Anjali and welcome. The 'Black Marks' books were released early on here (pre-publication) but only the first four chapters of each book. The whole books are available on Amazon but I'm aware that's not the case in India. I'm looking at the possibility of putting the whole of each future series on here and I'll let you know very shortly about that. Tinto

Anjali

Hi, newly joined member. Some chapters of Black Marks seem to be missing for me, mainly the last chapter in each book. Any ideas on how I can read them?

Tinto

I guess the story is a little different from many of my others in that, as you say, the husband isn't the one pushing the hardest for his wife to get together with her potential bull. That push (or 'pull') is coming from probably 3 different directions in Sterling, Vanessa and Amelia. Not that Wes is complaining. For the moment at least.

Bareslut

This is an Ineresting storyline. So many themes that are new. Seems like every new theme challenges me by hitting on factors that rub me the wrong way, offset by factors that get under your skin and fester with the familiar cuckold desires. The contact is an example. I really don't know what to think. A contract, despite its many real life out clauses, just brings a pyschological commitment to the relationship...in this case before the relationship evens evolves into full sex. Sometimes the emphasis on the contract feels forced, like Sterling is desperate to "lock" Ames into a committment. But it's a great way to introduce real conversation between the married couple about what they really want. These types of conversations are often times much more manipulative with one partner or the other bribing the other to give them what they want, with a bribe of sex . This feels like it has more of a kitchen table feel....which ironically, to me, hits my emotions even harder. I am torn because, unlike many Tinto stories where the hub manipulates the wife into sex with other men, you have the complicating factor of Sterlings wife almost "grooming" the poor girl. I haven't read the full story, just these snippets Tinto posts on Patreon, but maybe it's just me, I'm not getting a solid sense of chemistry between Ames and Sterling. On the other hand, I feel like this story has done a great job of establishing a real life vanilla friendship with the girls book club. That friendship before sex is do lacking in other cuckold erotica writers. So I go back to my first comment. It is an interesting story that is challenging me. I find myself constantly in conflict as I read it to decide is this hot, or not? I'm looking forward to hear how the rest of Tintos Patreon's feel about this story.


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