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Black Marks 4 - Chapter Two

🕑 Added 2025-02-15 00:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Tinto

Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Ash might have grown a pair with Finn, but no, I'm not wholly sure either if he appreciates what could be on the other side of the dungeon door, should Marcie get more involved down there.

Marco

I usually wait for the book to be released on Amazon but I am really digging the characters from this chapter. I like the pushback from Ash, much prefer the cuck to have some fight in him instead of being a complete doormat. Finn is getting a little too comfortable with the arrangement, but I wonder if Ash realizes what kind of Pandora's box will open if Marcie goes back to Traders. Sounds like this could blow up in his face in a hurry. However, he might actually like that!

Tinto

Cheers, and 'bulls in a china shop' gave me a laugh.

Bareslut

Love this episode. The anger and resentment coming from Ash and directed at his wifes Bull feels so real and organic. I think even very beta cucks in rl reach this point where they "fight the bit" so to speak. Some conflict makes the submission much more unpredictable with ups and downs along the way. Count me as one who enjoys the "minor" character Bulls like Finn, Huey and even Walden. The guys that aren't as rich, aren't as suave, aren't as good looking. They are more like Bulls in a China shop, not intentionally causing damage (like Richmond) but unthinkingly (sometimes) putting up obstacles and trials both for their couples and themselves. Finn's diminishing respect for Ash is an example. Adds some drama to the story. Another great read. Thanks Tinto.


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