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Chapter 15 - Above & Beyond

🕑 Added 2025-01-25 00:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Tinto

Nice that you noticed and appreciated some of those little details. I feel the same really. Often, what on the face of it should be minor lines of description or dialogue, somehow end up contributing more to the eroticism of a scene than the sex acts themselves.

Bareslut

Every time I read this chapter another layer of the onion is peeled back. This has to be Tinto's tour de force. There are so many little, almost throwaway descriptions that add such emphasis, feeling and context here. I apologize for what will be a lengthy post but these are just a few lines or situations that stood out to me, in the first third of the chapter...... Walden snaps his fingers and whistles for Sandra to bring towels. The description of how the cum looks different depending upon the slut wife's hair color. "Holy crap, she smells so strongly of it" ..... the semen covering her. "Her tits jiggle, several angry purple bites...., her nipples still crinkled and hard". BTW...crinkled is a PERFECT adjective to describe hard nips...I love it. Walden yelling "go get ready for round 2". So in charge, so Alpha. The description of the girls changing room..."grotty.....like a 1950's prison". That sets the scene extraordinarily. A nice golf/country club for the weathly, but the sluts are sent to basically the "servants" facilities. Such a small degradation that fits seamlessly into the mood of the situation. The glistening trail of cum running down the inside of Rachel's long left leg. Evie asking (telling) kev to clean the accumulated semen from her shoes...how degrading for him! Walden exposing Kev's chastity to Keith. And the response " Why man? Why?" I mean my own face flushes as such innocent, honest, unintentional abuse. Joe and kev serving as bar backs. I could go on and on. It's these little things that stick in my mind more than the big sex scenes. Being a cuck is such a mental fetish and these are the cuts that heal very slowly. Bravo!

Tinto

It's great to hear that you got a sense of the emotions experienced by the men whose partners were on the receiving end at the party. I agree that Walden has been flexing his 'muscles' lately. It may be something to do with him having a new regular cuck couple of his own to use as he sees fit. A couple to augment what he has with the younger Amanda and Chris. Plus with learning more about Evie & Kev's relationship with Richmond he's no doubt relishing the opportunity to try and take advantage of them too. I don't know whether he perhaps also feels that Phil is floundering at the moment as well. But Rachel and Sophie's return to Traders (assuming it happens) and Richmond's reaction to that, might dent Barrett's current smugness. You're probably right about the emotional attachment and needs of the older women in this story compared to the younger ones. It's an interesting question about whether that makes the older women's submission deeper. More intense perhaps? Re Pantyboy; I don't even think he knows how far he might go if Barret continues to lead him down the same path.

Bareslut

Great chapter. My one small concern with the previous episode was that there were so many cocks the gang bang didn't feel quite as intense in a cuckold angst way. This one felt very much more personal....I could feel the pain, humiliation, frustration, angst and excitement from Joe, Kev, Rene and Panty. Those are the kind of emotions that pop into my head a week after reading this chapter, still fresh and raw. I talk a lot about a cucks descent down the rabbit hole. I feel like we are seeing Walden spiraling UP a Dominant tower. He is very much in charge of the sluts, the cucks, the sub/slaves and even his invited guests. It's like his balls are growing at every turn as he chases the dragon of more and more power. He really heaps the humiliation and degradation on all HIS sluts, cucks, subs....from the way he talks to the Traders gang, to the way he orders around Sandra and Rene, to the fact he fucks Carol as she bends over the toilet. I LOVE how Carol cums so quickly as Mr. BARRETT SIR, fucks and spanks her. One thing I have noticed about the older women, Sophie and Carol, it seems much more emotional to them. Whereas the younger girls, in general, have developed a yearning for big cock, the older ladies tend to fall hard for someone that still finds them attractive and gives them the......purpose?????.....they may have been unsuccessfully searching for their whole life. I don't know that it makes the level of submission any deeper, but it seems the heart is more connected with the physical and mental surrender. And panty....I don't remember the level of public ( despite the anonymous hood) degradation to a cuck since Vaughn. With Walden's sadistic streak needing to be fed, there's no telling how much panty is willing to sacrifice to chase his dragon of mental masochism. Well done!


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