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Black Marks - Chapter 1

🕑 Added 2024-09-13 23:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Tinto

Glad you liked the first chapter, Chuck. The food truck girl appears in a later chapter too but I'm not sure yet what part she and her husband might play in the whole series. Yes, there is another couple in this story from a previous series. We follow Ash and Marcie from 'Hotwife Switch' as well.

Chuck

I to enjoyed the first chapter, I like when there is another hot wife in the story. I believe you said some of the ones we have been following will be in this story. I think there could be a story with the other food truck. I can see if the food truck girl is a hot wife. She is the catalyst to get Amelia started

Tinto

Glad you enjoyed the start Chris. It's fascinating how different readers can get completetly opposite takes on how hard (or easy) it might be for Wes to persuade Amelia. I'm pretty sure too that Wes is pissed off about Theo going away to uni. But I guess he's used to his hopes in that department being frustrated. You'll see in the next couple of chapters though that Amelia's connection with Theo's family isn't over yet. I'll be honest, I hadn't thought too much about the couple at the market and Wes wondering whether he might learn something from them. But it's a fair point, he could logically get to being more curious about that.

chris

I have been looking forward to this story since you mentioned it. Certainly not disappointed with the start. Well Wes certainly is desperate to play out his fantasy but looks like it might take a bit of effort to get Amelia to play along. Which I look forward to seeing I do enjoy a build up where the wife is reluctant at first and husband has to put lots of effort in to encouraging her. With Wes being so desperate I can see him not really thinking things through too much, so when things start moving, he may not have too much control. Then having lots of doubts what he has started but of course also really excited as well. I am sure Wes is disappointed about Theo going and imagining Amelia with him. Perhaps not really imagining her with an older man up to now this might be another and new turn on for him, when he meets Theo’s dad. She now already has a connection with the new neighbours with the dog so I am sure they will be more than happy to let her make a fuss of Coco and stop and talk and get to know her more. Also, the other couple at the market and spotting the woman’s gold ankle. I did wonder if Wes going to try and get more friendly with them. I am sure he is curious and maybe he could learn from them.


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