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Dev Build 0.1.5.1 - Club Update - Alex & Griffin

🕑 Added 2023-02-18 06:18:08 +0000 UTC

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Danny Nym

Thank you! I'm glad you liked that crazy fan moment. I hadn't seen anyone comment on it yet, so knowing it worked for you is nice to read πŸ™‚ And I'm also glad you're enjoying the side characters. Having such a big cast and making everyone unique/developed can be challenging, so it's good to know they're engaging!

Danny Nym

Haha, I don't mind long comments. Reading everyone's thoughts is always a lot of fun. I will absolutely have more for the peep show moment - probably more than you'd expect. And Forte as well will be in an interesting CG... I'm glad you enjoyed the story even though your favs aren't involved at the moment! πŸ™‚

Aiden Woodstein

The way you map all this out is brilliant. Enjoyed getting to know Griffin more than I thought I would. Also, I share a favorite movie with him which was nice. But really loved the Alex update. He's one of my favorites and I was very here for that kiss. It was so good. The peak at the Alex route had some great humor as well. The crazy fan. Omg. The screeches I let out lol. Such fun and wild characters too. Loved meeting Wes and Jordi. Wes gives me a pastel goth vibe and I'm here for that. Relatable. Loved Jordi's look a lot. Also, I like how he and Wes mesh in a scene together. Opposites but it works. It entertains. I love Antonio. The whole team honestly. All your side characters are so well-developed. That moment with Hannah too. So good. So good.

John

Oh and I loved Griffin's gossip session; really gave us more character backstory to chew on for all the people at at the college (yes I want to see Riley's sex dungeon, and explore more with Will haha)(And I STILL insist on a romance path for Leo! everything you write about him makes me want it more! haha) Anyway apologies for the long comment, I'm just glad to be back and enjoying your amazing work! xx

John

Oh this was was a fun dev. I wasn't a fan of Griffin at first but now he's warming up to me. I'm also very curious how everything is going to tie in with Matt since all three directions (Matt's place, Club, Frat Party) all have very different energies as to how they perceive Matt. Alex isn't my type, but I will 100% say you're doing an incredible job writing his story. I especially loved his interaction with stalker fan and blue haired genuine fan, the comparison there was a really sweet touch. My faves though were Forte and Jordi though! I love Jordi's energy so much and I don't know why everyone is eye-rolling at him. he's just a lovable sweet himbo! I'm almost sad that he'll just be a grind'm hookup and now a full romance partner. But then I also said the same for Parker haha. And Forte; WOOF! This could be because I'm probably in a similar Generation as him but not only is he my type physically/sexually, but I also really enjoyed getting to know him too. He's maybe a little demanding here and there but you have to be when you're a manager (and in bed he can demand whatever he wants from me haha) I'll also give props to Antonio (The bodyguard? the name slips my mind). But that could be because I am a sucker for a strong silent type who could manhandle me haha Also HOW RUDE OF YOU to deny us the (Spoilers) peep show moment CG! and forcing us to go through the no sex branches is smart for seeing what you may have missed, but I still felt butthurt and punched the "coming soon" options a few times hoping they would let me anyway!

Danny Nym

Thank you! And I'm glad Griffin has been intriguing. It took a little while to find his "voice," but I think I landed where I originally imagined.

Konnect

Ok! Yeah, I saw that the post mentioned being able to proposition Alex, but I thought that meant if you went into the Club solo there was an option to initiate a convo about hooking up because it also mentioned propositioning him in his room, and propositioning just means presenting the option, not actually following through. So, I thought there was an actual scene that was affected by something else. And, yeah, I wound up back tracking to before meeting Alex and fast forwarding, but that didn’t change anything. Thanks for the clarification though.

E-jay35

I really enjoyed this peek into the club update. I was fully expecting to prefer Alex's storyline given he's been one of my favorites. But I have to say, I loved Griffin. He's such an intriguing character, something tells me he might cause quite a bit of drama depending on my choices down the line. πŸ˜… Regardless, truly excited to get to know him better throughout the story. And of course meeting Jordi and Wes was fun too. Jordi definitely stole my heart though. Not only is he a short king, but he's easily excited like a puppy, love it. πŸ₯°πŸ₯° Can't wait to see him in the Bonus Gallery. Playing through multiple choices, I could definitely see the amount of work you put in for this update. There are so many different changes in the story both small and large depending on your choices, and that's just for Alex and Griffin. You've done a great job working on all of this alone. Despite it only being a dev build, its been well worth the wait. Definitely got me even more excited for the full Club Update. πŸ˜‰

Danny Nym

The furthest you can go in this build is a kiss, but the final version will have the full hookup scene. "What's not in this build" in the post lists what's still to be added. The "not defined" error typically means that when loading your save, the game couldn't backtrack to a point it needed to make sure all choice variables were registered. Based on the code line listed in the traceback, you're on the right path to get one more CG before you've basically exhausted Alex's available content. It's just that the code block for *not* kissing him is checked first, and since the game apparently couldn't find the variable for that, that's what popped up the error. The only way I know to fix this is to start a new game and then skip back to where you were. As someone who's had to skip through the whole game *a lot*, it really only takes a few minutes to fast-forward. It'll briefly stop so you can re-pick choices, as well as if I changed/added any dialogue that you haven't seen yet, but clicking through it will get it to fast-forward again. Please give fast-forwarding from the start a try when you get a chance, and if there's still an error there, please let me know!

Konnect

Hmmm. I loaded my previous Alex save, but I keep getting errors, and it looks like we can't actually do anything besides kiss? I accepted the kiss, but the error has to do with declining it. After Hannah leaves this happens and then Alex says he's going downstairs... [code] I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred. While running game code: File "game/scriptD2.rpy", line 103932, in script if alex_turned_down_kiss_d2: File "game/scriptD2.rpy", line 103932, in if alex_turned_down_kiss_d2: NameError: name 'alex_turned_down_kiss_d2' is not defined -- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------ Full traceback: File "game/scriptD2.rpy", line 103932, in script if alex_turned_down_kiss_d2: File "/private/var/folders/6f/s45jf_4s64v802jq4s_vf7y40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/27F5FCDD-EC87-4DC7-A439-E1D073200953/d/FreshmenPhysicalEducation.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/ast.py", line 1893, in execute if renpy.python.py_eval(condition): File "/private/var/folders/6f/s45jf_4s64v802jq4s_vf7y40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/27F5FCDD-EC87-4DC7-A439-E1D073200953/d/FreshmenPhysicalEducation.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/python.py", line 2266, in py_eval return py_eval_bytecode(code, globals, locals) File "/private/var/folders/6f/s45jf_4s64v802jq4s_vf7y40000gn/T/AppTranslocation/27F5FCDD-EC87-4DC7-A439-E1D073200953/d/FreshmenPhysicalEducation.app/Contents/Resources/autorun/renpy/python.py", line 2259, in py_eval_bytecode return eval(bytecode, globals, locals) File "game/scriptD2.rpy", line 103932, in if alex_turned_down_kiss_d2: NameError: name 'alex_turned_down_kiss_d2' is not defined Darwin-19.6.0-x86_64-i386-64bit Ren'Py 7.4.8.1895 Freshmen Physical Education Dev-0.1.5.1 Sun Feb 19 22:28:26 2023 [/code]

Jonathon Hill

OOH excited. Love this game and your work is awesome!

Kaiden Cearley

I can't wait to get off work to play it! I'm so proud of you, Danny, for making it this far! Alrighty, Griffin here I come!


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