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Rewrite the Stars VI || Page 05

🕑 Added 2025-07-21 19:21:53 +0000 UTC

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Jose S

Bruh... not cool

Nicholas Prestileo

Pluh 🗣️🔥🗣️🔥🗣️

Nicholas Prestileo

Once the chapter is finished prob by May or September

Nicholas Prestileo

So this was all a damn dream??? MOTHERFU-

Ronan

He's busy for the exam, so we need to patient for now

Ssr Offshore

will the next page come out for free???

Ronan

Sorry for not writing you, I'm still waiting for full release for free but when I open the Patreon page you release four chapter and I'm thankful you do that, I'm to comprehend it what the straggle the two couple on the near future I hope you continue this story underated hero. You have no idea I'm thinking right now, hahaha this comic is best and great, I hope the parents see the the two couple for more dramatic action.

Plane two towers

This is the best comic book I ever read however the plot is about an incest couple running away from home so I can't recommend it to anybody else. What a shame.

Marcelo

hm. When will the next page be published?

MR.FAN

😀🙂😐🙂‍↕️😮‍💨🫤😕🙁 Man this hits me like a PLUH bus rn, all dat? As a dream? Making the viewers preparing to jump at the edge on their seats and dying waiting for next chapter is really good. It also projects the utter sadness of it... Man this shi made me fr sad, what a wonderful story arc. Keep it up Hero.

GKnight

Hi I know you’re still probably not going to let the people without memberships see the rest for a while, but just wondering, when are you planning to unlock the other pages for those without?

Livingg_017

@UnderratedHero This change in the arguments is something at the height of some of the best novelists out there, you caught me off guard, I was starting to notice things that didn't make much sense but I didn't expect something this big. I love jobs that are well done and this is by far one of the comics with best narration I've ever read. I'm reading V for vendetta, probably one of the deepest comics ever written and your storytelling right now is steps above. I will support any of your projects no matter what it is, because I know that you, as well as me, are of those that no matter what they do, they put all the effort they can into what they do because they believe in what they do. Ive been thinking to get into the comic writing community for some time and I honestly don't know how to start, I've got some cool ideas and sketches but idk how to find readers or who else to ask for recommendations. I would be very thankful if you helped me. I leave my discord here for easier communication: Livingg_017 . I also talk spanish if it is easier to use for you.

Hanry Jack

I'm feeling a little better by reading the comment i guess it reading

Hanry Jack

Hey UnderratedHero first of all i just wann say this is such a good comic when i first started to read it i thought it was just diguesting incest but no it got story(maybe even more than the cannon)it keep me hooked and make me wann read more this is the second comic with a good story although this is better cause the other one"It (not) Your fault" is kinda sa but still also a good story i just know you have your school life (and i have mine) so i just wann know when the next chapter coming out so no.7 is public. Really wish i could buy the membership but being in a civil war country with no access to any outside thing like paypal or stuff at all i could not so all i could do is control my feeling and wait for the next chapt. Really wish i could buy the membership tho :(.

Marcelo

I guess it was too perfect to be true. I can't wait to see what things are really like and what is going to happen. 😮😮

UnderratedHero

Thank you for the kind message!

N Ti

Hey UnderratedHero, I just want to say thank you for creating Rewrite the Stars. This masterpiece… I swear, it’s the best thing I’ve ever witnessed. The fact that you share it for free, chapter by chapter, with so much passion and dedication, is insane. I hope you have an amazing life, full of happiness and success, because you truly deserve it. Your work touched so many hearts, including mine. Keep going—you’re a legend.”

Rodrigo Lpz Rmr

Noo!!! I thought lacy was real hero why!!!!!

Jayden

I really hop thay end up haveing there own littel family soon i can see the end of this chapter teaseing us that lynn is pregnant there for setting up chapter7 or 8? I lost count. But still its good to see things isn't as bad as thay seem but i feel shits gonna go south fast real fast...

Jhmilam

Hero I hope you are feeling alright and I’m looking forward to the next Page Of Lynncoln😀

UnderratedHero

It's really challenging :'(

Antn100Q

Adulting is, in fact, hard

UnderratedHero

It's been good so far lol

Kevin

Aww, poor gal ;_; . (oh also hope school stuff is goin well dude, glad to have you back)

UnderratedHero

Always glad to bring in some depression to the table.

UnderratedHero

Well, she says she can't, but she seems to be dreaming something else...

David Mullins

Woooooooooooooooowwwwwww... That was very wise and cool.

Tuckster1999

Nice to see a new page and congrats on finishing your finals. I think what sticks out to me is Lynn not knowing if she would ever be ready to be a mom. Even when you disregard the nature of her and Lincoln’s relationship it is a fairly natural and very common thought that people in a relationship that serious have at some point. Even though no one ever truly is ready to be a parent. I can’t not wait to see what Lincoln is up to and if he is just as jaded, or what I’m thinking is that he that he is much more optimistic as is his nature. Sure Lynn looks bummed now but I just hope that we get to see her smile in this reality soon. She deserves it.

I.O. Penner

It is a cold, hard truth that being an adult is not always fun and games. There are certainly times where adulting can be fun, but hard work and effort has to be put in constantly in order to make it enjoyable. Or, at the very least, tolerable. In this case, adulting can be treated like one of Lynn’s soccer games. Lincoln and Lynn have to come up with a game plan, plow through the defense, and score and achieve those goals. Rinse and repeat and, most importantly, adapt. And as long as Lincoln and Lynn have each other through these tough times ahead, there’s nothing they can’t try to overcome. After all, it’s not just how many times you get knocked down, but how you pick yourself up and keep going.

PropellerDoggo

There the depression that I know and love. Welcome back

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Welcome back, Underrated Hero. I've been very patient for you to see what happens next on the comic when you get back. And now that you're back... Oh, boy! A new page for the comic! I wonder how this one plays out... ( 1 Minute Later ) I know how you feel Lynn Jr. Gee, adulting really is hard. And it looks like you were right, Hero. Lynn was having a dream and the worst part was the fact that she said she doesn't think she's ready to be a mother yet. I have to admit, seeing Lynn like this, reminds me of something that I can't explain but still... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧 I sure hope things will get better for Lynn Jr. and her true love for life. But in the meantime... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe ) ( In The Sand ) 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

UnderratedHero

Exactly!

UnderratedHero

Thank you!

Zachary Thompson

Welcome back hero.

Paul Hoon

Life’s not easy, but it’s less hard when you got a partner and you got one Lynn. He’s the love of your life.

UnderratedHero

I thought the last page had made that clear lol

UnderratedHero

New pages should be coming out more consistently now!

UnderratedHero

When is life not testing us all?

UnderratedHero

>just telling us the real situation of theirs would be fine You mean, exactly what she just did? lmao

Jacob Lossing

Damn it, all a dream, seriously

C.E. Zim93

Thank this is hard to watch. Everything will be ok Lynn. You got this. Lincoln is here with you and will support you. Nice to see a new page again Hero.

Thuren Miller

So she was dreaming right from the very start, huh. And from the looks of it , life is still testing her by the day.

UnderratedHero

She had everything she wishes for in that previous page

UnderratedHero

La dura realidad de todos los días

UnderratedHero

She does her best

UnderratedHero

Yeah, she'll never have to deal with it by herself

UnderratedHero

Too real

UnderratedHero

Exactly lmao

UnderratedHero

Trust the process ;-;

Moss1998

Gee, she doesn't need to break the 4th wall just to explain to us that everything back there wasn't real.😅 Just telling us the real situation of theirs would be fine.