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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 57

🕑 Added 2025-03-17 05:22:54 +0000 UTC

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Yhnbj

When did the relationship jump from kissing to being nude n bed together?

TheLoreMaker

I get the feeling that Angus knows what's going on. They do things a little differently over in Loch Loud.

Mark John Banzon

Yep cousin marriage that they were allowed in medieval kinda freaky thing. 🫠

Roberto Espínola

La familia Loudgaryen.

Owen Landr

Thats some craaaazy 1600's Loud family lore

Blazzore

Yeah, I don't think Lincoln and Lynn Jr are going to stay in Scotland for very long, and they better hope Morag won't betray them by telling their parents that they are currently in the castle. Lincoln can become the duke once more and ban his own family from going to Scotland, but that could be a bad idea.

TendingHealer13

Reqdy

TendingHealer13

Right

TheSchwifyOne

Here's my username: avi6187

Kevin

Aww, I do love just the little moments of Lynn trying to cheer Lincoln up. That's adorable. Just a pause for some small tender moments, after all the drama an craziness.

TendingHealer13

Username

TheSchwifyOne

Hi! I'm good! How are you? But I've got discord, of course! I don't remember how to add someone on Discord, as most of the people I talk to there are already my friends. Should I give you my username, or my display name?

TendingHealer13

Do you have discord?

TendingHealer13

FACTS !!!!!!!!

TendingHealer13

Pass please

TendingHealer13

He has?

TendingHealer13

Hey...how are you?

Julio vargas

Hero you could do alot if you did have discord server 😁 mostly a win win for us and you

TendingHealer13

Me too bro

TendingHealer13

Two more!!!!

BRICE MORRIS

I ment I loved this chapter

BRICE MORRIS

I knew this was going to happen and I love how many more page's are left before its the end of this chapter and the beginning of then next chapter

TendingHealer13

Reafy

TendingHealer13

Forget...i have

TendingHealer13

I dont have discord...lol

Don't be afraid, I am kind

I'm on Discord. Sorry, I was a bit busy. I'll edit this comment to remove my profile name later. @ [EXPIRED]

TendingHealer13

Nice history tip

TendingHealer13

Wow

Jose Hernandez

The queen married her cousin i think the Scott's would be okay with you two Lincoln they know how royalty works.

TendingHealer13

Where are you from?

TendingHealer13

Yk you are a good person

TendingHealer13

Thanks bro

Don't be afraid, I am kind

It would be neat for me too. But I am generally not active at social media. I am sorry for that. Still if you want to chat and talk sometimes, why not.

TendingHealer13

Hero, fix the Dm

TendingHealer13

Idk how to talk lol

TendingHealer13

Im kidding, but id ypu want to tañk, im always free

TendingHealer13

Pleqse, you are kind, andi need friends lol

Don't be afraid, I am kind

I dunno but I am pretty sure there were Direct Message system in Patreon. Maybe in app? Maybe UnderratedHero must do that in their settings. But I don't know.

TendingHealer13

Bro? 🤨

TendingHealer13

🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨🤨

TendingHealer13

But seriouslly...whats a dm and how you dm???

TendingHealer13

Haahah

Don't be afraid, I am kind

How to fill your DMs with art requests. Bet you did something like "RTS V || Page 56.5" somewhere. That would be funny. At least they finally slept. And I guess this is not their first sleep like... "That". :-I Would be cool to see what their ancestors also lived back then. Also, this is probably the page with the most comments among this comic's pages. I wonder why XD Good job mate. Keep going.

TendingHealer13

Yeah

UnderratedHero

You're welcome

UnderratedHero

We'll find soon enough!

David Mullins

Oh boy, what's the next chapter going to be called?

Thuren Miller

I wonder what's there next move will be like?

Ashley Randall

I also got to thinking, that they might not of done the deed. They both are so physically, mentally, and emotionally wiped that love making might have been the last thing on their minds. Their clothes probably reeked, with the staff washing all of them. So Linc and Lynn probably both took a shower, dried off, gotten into bed and cuddled, enjoying the very small moment of peace. They probably fell asleep talking over plans, especially taking Lynn's well-rounded plans into consideration.

Ashley Randall

What about baraag? Or pixiv? They both would allow it, probably. Have you seen some of the stuff baraag puts out. Wow! And they are both over 18, right? (Nudge Nudge, wink wink. Know what I mean, know what I mean?) 😈😇

TendingHealer13

Haha

Julio vargas

Everytime hero does this of teasing Lincoln and Lynn having good moments it’s like that icarly episode of the panda hitting Kenan Thompson with a tennis racket hero like the panda hits us with a racket with pages likes this 🤣

Julio vargas

Yep we know totally sucks maybe other platforms like Bluesky lol this what happens when you tease it hero! People want more 🤣

TendingHealer13

Me neither😭😭😭😭😭

TendingHealer13

Sus 🤨

UnderratedHero

Lots of people asking for it, too bad Patreon wouldn't allow it.

Happychap2628

Oh yes of course, I can understand that. I just can't believe it's ending soon.

TendingHealer13

Haha

UnderratedHero

At least two more

TendingHealer13

Oh nierda

UnderratedHero

I'm still figuring it out

UnderratedHero

No va a quedar embarazada por accidente, son cuidadosos. Y pues las hermana sus sabían que tenían relaciones porque escucharon cuando Rita y Lynn Sr se lo preguntaron.

UnderratedHero

He knows them and he knows they're good kids. He doesn't judge people. He even forgave Morag!

UnderratedHero

Yeah

UnderratedHero

Exactly, she only wants Lincoln the way he is. Doesn't need anything else

UnderratedHero

There are more chapters in this story! And thank you so much for the kind praise.

UnderratedHero

I think a simple comic is the best we can expect 😅 but thank you!

Julio vargas

So did they you know did it 😆 there should be like a mini comic of them doing it between pages lol you know hidden parts of the story like the first time they did it til now 😆

UnderratedHero

Yeah, that's what the quote means

UnderratedHero

The intended ready of reading lol

UnderratedHero

For the moment, Lucy's staying in Royal Woods with everyone else.

UnderratedHero

They're doing all this to be together, after being separated for so long they needed to feel connected once again

TendingHealer13

Wow

TendingHealer13

I think...two more

Darcy lee

I found online there names are lyall and lachlan

Darcy lee

I should have posted a chapter sooner. I had a dream a couple nights ago where they finally make it to Scotland and looking through their ancestral book they find love letters of the two ancestors that look exactly like them. Through their Discovery it turns out they had a bastard Twins and one of them was their direct ancestor of the loud family we know today word get back to there parents after discovering this dark family secret start to have a different point of view.

David Mullins

( Speaking Through The Straw In The Sand ) Hey, Underrated Hero, I almost forgot to ask you something... What's after Separation? Is there going to be another chapter of the story?

TendingHealer13

I hope at least one of them

TendingHealer13

Facts

TendingHealer13

Hehehe

TendingHealer13

Yep

Jachob(braineyac)

So any thoughts on the next chapters title “Resolutions” “Reunions” “Reflections” ?

TendingHealer13

Siento que las palabras finales de lincoln, cobraran importancia

TendingHealer13

*insertar mirada de las mil yardas*

TendingHealer13

😏😏😏

TendingHealer13

Bueno...la verdas...como las hermanas se enterqran que tienen...sexo y...que pasa si lynn queda embarazada

TendingHealer13

Yep

TendingHealer13

😏

TendingHealer13

For a npc like me...its nice

TendingHealer13

Yeahhhh

TendingHealer13

Facts

TendingHealer13

I saw it

TendingHealer13

Wqit...in other page?

TendingHealer13

Rico...mentiras

TendingHealer13

🤨😏

TendingHealer13

Pray

TendingHealer13

Jajaja

TendingHealer13

🙂

TendingHealer13

Goodbye my innocenece

TendingHealer13

Laugh

TendingHealer13

Ma guy not sleep

TendingHealer13

Maybe

TendingHealer13

Yes

Fabinator

I always go back to search for your coment they always give me a smile

Aboubakar Bagayoko

He seems to be well aware of their hidden relationship nor doesn't seem to bother him

Paul Hoon

So, two more pages left?

Paul Hoon

He knows and he’s cool with it. But Lincoln’s right. He can’t be Duke because the town knows them. However, Lynn doesn’t want a Duke, she wants him. It’ll take time to heal and start over. Also, I love how it’s after they made love.

Ashley Randall

It just keeps getting better and better! The plot. The artwork. The story line. It all continues to rise, even though we are coming to the end of this chapter. (Just chapter, right? The last paneled page will have a to be continued on it, right? Please.) And the characters have become so well-rounded, especally Lynn. It's just fantastic!

TheSchwifyOne

This is an amazing story. Is there an award for best comic of 2025? Because if there is, I need to know so that I can nominate this chapter! It's a shame copyright law prevents you from making a movie adaptation. I'd pay lots of money to see it in the movie theater! Not working on an AU movie with you is a missed opportunity for Nick. There is the potential for everyone to make lots of money, and the cartoon world would never be the same again. I know I commented way too much, lol. But I'm extremely impressed by your work. Hopefully someday, they'll weaken copyright law, so that such a movie can be made! I'll keep dreaming, I guess.

David Mullins

Oooooooooooooohhhhhh... Okay, that makes a lot of sense. Well then... ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out Again ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )

TheSchwifyOne

And when he says "history doesn't repeat, it rhymes", he's referring to Lincoln and Lynn's ancestors, right? I guess it runs in the family, so to speak.

TheSchwifyOne

I just realized the twist. Angus knows! And it seems like he supports them. Makes me have hope for a happy future for the two!

TheSchwifyOne

I could see Lucy resenting their family for rejecting Lincoln and Lynn’s love despite her warnings, which led to the family falling apart. She might even figure out where they went, tell Angus she misses them, and leave Royal Woods with Haiku (I ship them) and Lily to reunite with Lincoln and Lynn, so that they could heal as a family. A somewhat happy ending, what do you think?

Lilblackviper

I kinda wanna see their ancestors ghost appear through the window hold eachother and supporting them from the background

Muze Clark

I just want to say that the first two panels are even more hilarious when you actually read this and the previous page in sequence.

TheSchwifyOne

Hi UnderratedHero! I'm glad I subscribed, as the anticipation was killing me! But I have a question. Will there be a reunion chapter with Lucy and Lily?

Happychap2628

Oh dame, I bet they really needed to relieve some stress.

Silvester Rodriguez

OK No Pregnant For Lynn & Lincoln May Tell Angus The Truth. Or Not Tell Him The Truth.

UnderratedHero

Las dos

SreznoJIG07

Hmmm That makes sense

UnderratedHero

She's not getting pregnant in this page

UnderratedHero

There were some precedents, yeah. And Angus figured it out.

UnderratedHero

Indeed, as painful as it is, their past is behind them, and they can finally start looking into their future together.

UnderratedHero

Always nice to throw a curve ball.

UnderratedHero

I don't know, maybe one day I'll write a comic for them lol Suffice to say, they were indeed in love back then.

CipherRage0909

Angus definitely knows Lincoln and Lynn's relationship. "History does repeat itself." and I totally called it that their ancestors were also in an incest relationship! XD But I'm just wondering how it went with those two. I mean, incest relationships weren't really that serious back in that era, but it was still taboo to some.

Boeing707

Holy shit, didn't see this twist coming.

CipherRage0909

They already did. I can't imagine the amount of sex they had before they ran away.

I.O. Penner

Aha! I thought as much – it was part of their lineage! The Duke had the same forbidden feelings for his sporty older sister, as well. Not gonna lie— I did suspect how later that night, Lincoln and Lynn would consummate the same way their ancestors did. And in that same bed, too, I betcha anything! Oh, it’s just so wonderful. Yes, Lincoln and Lynn’s stay in Loch Loud will be temporary; yes, the whole town knows they’re related; yes, they’ve lost so much this week. But there will be so much more for Lincoln and Lynn to gain in the future. And they will definitely have to continue fighting for it. But at least for now, Lincoln and Lynn can make up for lost time as they begin to heal.

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic again... and on a Monday too... ( 1 Minute Later ) Huh, teensy question, Underrated Hero... Well, actually it's more like a question meets the answer and a query meets a statement... You know, when I read the first panel of the page, I've seemed to have noticed that Angus has one those knowing faces on him... And what about the way The Duke and Lynn Jr's ancestor were stirring at each other in the paintings behind Lynncoln?... It was almost like they too have fallen in love with each other as well... Underrated Hero, if I didn't know or read this page any better, I'd almost have to say that... ( My Cousin Interrupting Me ) They're vegetarians?!... Nope, nope... That's not what I was going to say... Anyway, Underrated Hero, it's almost a bit like the relationship between Lincoln and Lynn Jr... Runs in the family... ( Realizing Again ) Oooooooooooooohhhhhh...

Muze Clark

The more you know. Cause Knowledge is Power! And Knowing is Half the Battle.

Silvester Rodriguez

What If They Not Using Protection Lynn Gets Pregnant She Blames Herself & She May Become A Mother Also Lincoln May Blames Himself Too & Become A Father Please Don’t Let This Happen No Spoilers Don’t Ruin This Story Please! Wait Until They Are 30 To 32 Years Old For Lynn & Lincoln!🙏

C.E. Zim93

Keyword " probably".😇

Muze Clark

*sighs* yeah, I should've figured *grumbles* I still want them to get some peace soon.

José Ángel Romero Rosales

Yo automáticamente al ver la nueva pág : Rico 😏 o triste 😢

C.E. Zim93

Angus knows a lot. I'm impressed. Wasn't sure if he knew but now we know. "G. I. Joe!!!"😎👍🏿

UnderratedHero

Next? Cuddle and sleeping. I think you should be asking what they were doing before.

UnderratedHero

Yeah, really painful situation for them.

UnderratedHero

He figured it out because he knows the secrets of Loch Loud and what the Duke was up to with one of his sisters.

SreznoJIG07

Hang on. Does Angus know that Lincoln and Lynn are in an incest relationship, and he doesn’t care? And is somewhat ‘supportive’?? Wow. That was something I didn’t see coming 😊 I wander what Lincoln and Lynn are going to do ‘next’… in the bed 😏

UnderratedHero

In the end, they just want to live a normal life together, and they won't be able to do it if everyone knows they're related.

UnderratedHero

I'm on a roll!

UnderratedHero

They're using protection. Probably.

UnderratedHero

What? That their ancestors wanted to keep the bloodline pure?

David Mullins

( Facepalm ) Oh, brother.

UnderratedHero

Hacía mucho tiempo que no escuchaba esa canción

UnderratedHero

We can only hope!

Justin Sigler

I hope everything goes well between them and their journey

alex sonic

Hoy es noche de sexo voy a devorar te de lo lindo hoy es noche se sexo y cumpliré tus fantasías hoy es noche de sexo

Chimadakid2006

Couldn't stop laughing I should have saw this coming 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Silvester Rodriguez

That Night They Are Naked In Bed?! What If Lincoln Got Lynn Pregnant & Having Sex Like NSFW What A Oh My God 😳😱Moment I Wish I See They Private Parts With My Own 👀 Eyes

Muze Clark

Excuse me while I go die of laughter. 🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂 How long was that? Did they even make it two minutes before he realized? Oh, please, Angus, please speak up to these young ones, please 🙏 😆 Edit: *reads the rest of the page* 😳 I was not ready for that. It wasn't much, but it was still more than I expected. And on a much more serious note, Angus, please talk to them and impress upon them how much you and perhaps the town would be on their side, please 🙏.