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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 51

🕑 Added 2025-03-08 22:18:08 +0000 UTC

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the unknown 607

PLEASE LET THEM HAVE 11 KIDS

TendingHealer13

Buen punto..

UnderratedHero

They did hear it, Lincoln confirmed it in a later page

UnderratedHero

We'll find soon enough!

Kevin

Nah, I think it means plan C. Whatever that is...

José Ángel Romero Rosales

Sin mencionar que lisa también puede usar su inteligencia para localizarlos

TendingHealer13

Come on, they been trough a lot, they can handle this...right?

Paul Hoon

You're right. They most certainly won't. God, the suspense is killing me. Almost every day I check my email for a notification when the next page is ready. I know these things take time, but I'm so hooked in!

Happychap2628

The man with the plan have ran out of juice, but physically and mentally. I wonder what was Plan B? and what did Lincoln mean by "That means..." are they giving up?

Paul Hoon

And during their sibling meeting. Although the walls were thin so they probably heard it. And yes, their family will most definitely get upset after reading the letter.

UnderratedHero

So do I!

UnderratedHero

I think it would've been the same end result had they sat their parents down and revealed their situation. The Canada incident made it a lot more confrontational, initially, but the whole psychologist thing would've happened anyway, and Lynn Sr and Rita's opinion on the matter wouldn't have changed.

UnderratedHero

Good thinking.

UnderratedHero

They certainly won't just give up on two of their kids running away.

UnderratedHero

The story is from Lynn and Lincoln's POV. The one time I broke that rule was during the song Luna and Sam were singing in the campfire while Lynn and Lincoln shared their moment in volume 4.

Double Gron

I hope their family won’t get too upset once they read that letter.

David Mullins

Same.

Paul Hoon

I hope so. At least, a scene of them reading the letter.

SoulTy

Will we see the reaction of the rest of the family?

Paul Hoon

Oh man, they're really running away. Whatever plan you two have, even if its risky, what other choice you got? And knowing the family, I doubt all of them or if any of them will respect their wish and let them go. I'm really expecting a later page to show them searching for them. Hopefully for Lincoln and Lynn, they don't find them.

Corey Peters

They should sleep on it. After a night together after months together they can help them think more clearly.

I.O. Penner

Ah, okay. I thought I missed something important in the previous pages. Sounds good to me!

David Mullins

Ooooooooh... okay, I get it.

Double Gron

Relax Dave, like I said I usually guess and think what will happen on the next page whenever I feel impatient on when it’ll come. So just guess what will happen on the next page to drown your impatience. Visualize it in your head.

UnderratedHero

Thank you! And don't worry, you didn't forget, Plan B hasn't been made public. It's one of the ideas Lynn and Lincoln had, but one Lincoln considers too risky to try. What it is, I leave it up to you guys

Double Gron

Well, it’s not like I want them to give up how they feel. It’s just that they could’ve told their parents about their feelings earlier and they would’ve helped them both. I don’t know what else to say, all I can say is that I hope they’ll be safe, responsible and came back home eventually.

I.O. Penner

That means…Plan C! Wow, this is so exhilarating and, at the same time, pulse-pounding! It still feels a little unreal, but I’m very proud of Lincoln and Lynn for finally listening to their hearts and leaving the Loud house. Obviously, that wasn’t an easy choice for them, but Lincoln and Lynn believe in their future together. Okay, so they have at least $4,340 and some allowance money to work with for now. It’s a small foundation, but they have to start somewhere. But in long-term format, Lincoln will definitely have to put his “Man with the Plan” thinking skills to the ultimate test. I can’t wait to see what he comes up with! I must say, thank you, Hero, for all you’ve done so far in making Lynncoln in this particular universe a reality! I, too, believe in their future together, despite what some of the other members of the Loud house might think. Lastly, I hate to say that I forgot, but what was Plan B for them?

David Mullins

To what? Please tell me... Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeasssssssseeeeee!!!!! 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

TLSM 115

Alright then lol great work tho I really hope we get a good ending to this

C.E. Zim93

I pray they'll be ok. This is serious.

UnderratedHero

Don't worry David, Lincoln clearly means to—

UnderratedHero

We have a few more pages to go to find out!

UnderratedHero

That could be a starting point. After that... Who knows

UnderratedHero

That makes two of us lol

UnderratedHero

I need time 😭

UnderratedHero

You mean give up on their love? No, I don't think so.

UnderratedHero

No me imagino a Lynn aprendiendo a hablar español jajajajjaa

alex sonic

Que vallan a México y vivan en monterrey es muy normal lo que hacen ahí XD

Double Gron

They are never gonna come around are they 😣😩?

TLSM 115

GOATED BUT MORE PLEASE lol

Moss1998

Now in this matter, realistic-ness will be essential. I hope you won't screw up!

Jachob(braineyac)

Uh not sure he’s a fish so probably not a good ideas to inhale water 😝

C.E. Zim93

Looks like they're on their own. Now what? They might need to change names

David Mullins

Can someone please tell me what Lincoln means?!

Moss1998

Inhaling water?! You really want him to be quiet! XD

David Mullins

What? What?! WHAT?!

Thuren Miller

So they're on the Lamb now huh? So what next adventure awaits for them.

UnderratedHero

We'll find soon enough

UnderratedHero

At least they have each other

TendingHealer13

Bro like calm down...inhalate h20...exalate co2

Muze Clark

That's fair

UnderratedHero

That would be a cool idea, but it would push all my plans back, so I don't see myself committing to something like that any time soon.

UnderratedHero

It seems like they don't ever get a break, so maybe sooner than expected.

UnderratedHero

That might be a short term solution

UnderratedHero

It means that they have to—

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) ( Excited ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic... ( 1 Minute Later ) What? What?! WHAT?! What does it mean, Lincoln? I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really like to know! The suspense is killing me more than any of the other previous pages! Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out ) ( Straw Poking Out Of The Sand So I Can Breathe )

TendingHealer13

You are probably right

Mia Roman

👯

CipherRage0909

My guess is that they're going to have to change their names and their looks if they don't want to risk being found by the cops or anyone else who recognizes them.

Muze Clark

As for page itself, how will our duo get out of this predicament? And how long and how far can they go before tragedy or relief finds them. Find out next time on Re. Write. The Stars!

Muze Clark

...*deep inhale, shaky exhale, screams out to the void* ... ... ... ... ... ... *reminds self that story is from the perspective of Lynn and Lincoln who wouldn't have been there to see everyone reading the letter, calms down* So, any chance that we can get an installment of everything from a sister's perspective? I've been wanting to see how Lucy saw everything since Chapter 3 and possibly getting more details on Lori's thoughts since the sister meeting. Not a necessity, obviously, but a curiosity.