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Rewrite the Stars IV || ENDING + EXTRAS!!!!!!!!
🕑 Added 2024-03-13 06:22:36 +0000 UTCThank you for making this story possible!
This is the final page of 'Rewrite the Stars IV: Secrets'. This volume is now completed, and I can't stress it enough: it's only possible thanks to YOU, patrons. Without your support, I wouldn't be able to take so many hours of my time to draw a passion project like this.
I'm leaving you the PDF versions in Spanish and English so you guys can download the story and enjoy it in HQ whenever you want!
I'm ecstatic about being able to get to this point in the story. Next Monday I'll be making an update with my full plans going forward up until the release of volume V.
However, I will leave you with one little teaser...
The title of the volume.
That's it, hope you have a great week :)
Comments
Jorge Guzman
Hay toy yo Grande hero
Paul Hoon
Knowing you UnderratedHero, you got a lot planned.
I.O. Penner
Oh, I’m so happy to see that you ended this volume on such a high note, Hero! I honestly thought this last page was going to end on a darker note. But you did have Lynn state “Until…”, which sent a chill up my spine when I first read it. And then, pair that with the title of the next volume… whew, I’d like to think I’m prepared for what may possibly come, but in the end, I think I'm only fooling myself. I just got the good feels all over again once I read this page - it evoked two particular warm memories of volumes past. The first one harkened all the way back to the end of volume 1, “Inseparable”, when young Lynn comes into little Lincoln’s room to check on him during the thunderstorm. In that scene, it’s so sweet and innocent, with Lynn showing her protective side and making sure her brother will be safe from the thunder and lightning. Fast-forward 10 years later to this volume and page, and this scene replays in an entirely different context now that their dynamic has changed. I got such a kick out of Lynn addressing her brother as Lover Boy! And the way she was dressed… ooh, she is acting anything but innocent here. Why have one pillow when Lincoln can have two? I just love and appreciate how Lynn climbing into Lincoln’s bed here echoes the end scene from that first volume. When they were kids, Lynn got in Lincoln’s bed as his older sister to protect him from the storm. Now, she’s climbing into Lincoln’s bed as his girlfriend to cuddle with him. And ironically, both of them are unaware there is actually a storm of a different kind brewing outside, which will make itself known soon enough. Warm memory #2 was the scene in volume 2, “Revelations”, during the revising of “Space Invader” where Lincoln and Lynn are sharing the same bed and Lynn rolls over in her sleep onto Lincoln’s chest. At first, Lincoln got red in the face and tried to fight those uncomfortable feelings that were swimming in his head. But take a look at him now – no redness in his face to be found and that discomfort is a thing of the past. I’m just so happy to see how far Lincoln has come in his romantic development with Lynn. As I mentioned previously, it is a little sad and bittersweet to see this volume come to a close. But this is yet another snapshot I want to freeze in time and just marvel and treasure it for as long as I possibly can! Even though I’m a little wary and nervous about what is coming next, I’m all the more eager and excited to see how these events are going to unfold! Thank you for such a wonderful, thrilling read, Hero! I can’t wait for Volume V!
Kevin
Oooh, I was worried theyd be found out an separated. That is gonna be a rough but beautiful chapter. I can't wait!
UnderratedHero
We'll see...
Willy Asaka
-Someone (Likely Lola or Lily) would rat out Lincoln & Lynn, resulting in Rita forcing both to council therapy, though the red string wouldn't snap; it'll be at its test later on. -It's a 2 year timeskip, Lynn struggles as adulthood creeps near her, Lincoln reluctantly tries to encourage Lynn not to sacrifice her dreams for her brother.
Mijael Sotelo
cine epico el tarantino de los comics
Thuren Miller
Can't wait what the next chapter is about
Paul Hoon
Great last page. Nice cliffhanger and separation? Wonder what’s that about? Either they get caught or Lynn's going to college while Lincoln's still in high school.
Corey Peters
Until? Uh oh until what?
TLSM 115
GOTED cant wait for the next volume keep up the great work
C.E. Zim93
End of a chapter. This was fun to read. Can't wait for more.
Julio vargas
What a volume it was I’m excited for the next one 😎
alex sonic
Cómo que así termina pensé que iba a ver un ending donde se entera la familia buen a esperar otra página está interesante la historia y felicitaciones en tu trabajo y en tu cumpleaños de la otra semana 🎂🫶🏼
