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Rewrite the Stars IV || Page 40
🕑 Added 2024-02-24 16:00:08 +0000 UTCWhen we're underneath the lights
My heart's no longer broken
For a moment
Just for a moment
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Can't believe you guys thought they'd just do the dirty on a sandy shore in the middle of the night 2 minutes after their first kiss lol READ THE ROOM.
If you wanted to see them play 'hide the salami' that would have to be a separate comic, like a RtS 4.5, but no one would want that..........
Comments
Ashley Uh... Oops
*whispers* you already have it written, roughed, lined, colored and locked away, don't you? as a writer myself, several of my stories have scenes that were cut... but never gotten rid of. we all have to be sneaky at some point. don't worry. I won't tell.
I.O. Penner
I have to give it to you, Hero – that was well played. It was quite the unexpected twist! I will admit, I let my hormones get the better of me when I typed up my last response. But in my defense, Lincoln was red in the face when he saw Lynn in that state of undress, so I’m sure his mind went down the same track that mine did. After surveying the scene multiple times, this felt really much-needed between Lynn and Lincoln. This past year had been very tough on the two of them, with them trying to not let romantic feelings blur the lines of their sibling relationship. But having them play and roughhouse in the water like they did when they were kids really helped to dispel the tension that had been building up between them. It was really nice to see Lynn and Lincoln so free, not a care in the world and forgetting about what everyone would think at that moment. They really deserve to be happy together, as siblings-turned-lovers and even more as soulmates. And even though everyone and their mother who thought it would get a little X-rated there on the beach was wrong, that certainly doesn’t mean the possibility won’t happen somewhere down the road in the future. Maybe even in the next volume, perhaps…
Paul Hoon
Well, the comic's not over yet. Maybe you'll surprise us or leave it to the next comic. With each comic, it's a few years later.
Kevin
Idc whether or not theres a sex scene, but I would take a RtS literally any number or amount you wanna draw my guy lol. Especially now that theyre finally an item, time for that sweet sappy couple stuff.
Willy Asaka
Wait a minute, didn't the hotel episode have Rita & Lynn Sr do something at the pool-
Thuren Miller
Honestly I was thinking the same thing, but then I realized they're are too young and not ready for that kinda stuff.
Paul Hoon
Yeah, they’ve been waiting a long time to be together. They got love sickness bad. LOL 😆🥰😙😘
UnderratedHero
Here you go, hope you like it
Hootsifer
i'd like a 4.5 :D
Jack
Oh and a RtS 4.5? 👀 no one would complain…
Jack
Your art is incredible and your story telling is spectacular! There’s no way I couldn’t get hooked!
C.E. Zim93
It's cool. I don't mind. Knew nothing spicy was going to happen anyway. Keep up the good work 🙂👍🏿
UnderratedHero
If it makes you feel better, Lincoln was confused too.
UnderratedHero
Maybe...
UnderratedHero
That's the best compliment I could receive!
Corey Peters
Give us the real page 40
C.E. Zim93
Dude! You got us! 🤣🤣
Jack
Have to admit, I was never a Lynncoln shipper before I started reading your comic a few months ago 🫢 but now I can’t get enough! They are adorable!
Happychap2628
Ha! I knew they wouldn't and even if Lynn wanted too Lincoln would gently refuse, as this isn't the time nor place or something.
Julio vargas
🤣🤣🤣 you would want them to do the dirty Hero!
Corey Peters
Boo
Antn100Q
… you know what you did
