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Rewrite the Stars IV || Page 29

🕑 Added 2024-01-21 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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I.O. Penner

But I do feel like her ability to inexplicably pop up out of nowhere without notice might possibly put a damper on this tender mood.

I.O. Penner

I can't imagine Lucy telling on Lincoln and Lynn for their budding feelings, either, Paul: she's no tattle-tale or loudmouth like Lola. God forbid Lola be the one to discover the relationship between Lincoln and Lynn. That would be her equivalent of striking gold - she'd have enough blackmail until she turned 18. I do also agree with your statement that Lucy would sympathize with her older siblings more so than the other sisters. When she gave Lincoln Lynn's sports brochure, it gave me the impression that she at least is aware that something is underlying between them. Lucy also had stated that she thought Lynn would talk to Lincoln about her going to this sports camp before making her decision. So that at least tells me the wheels in Lucy's head are turning, if nothing else.

Paul Hoon

This may sound weird, but I have a feeling that Lucy may somehow understand. I think a part of her knew all along or had a feeling herself. Either way, Lucy telling on Lincoln and Lynn doesn't sound like something she'd do.

I.O. Penner

I really love how Lynn clutches Lincoln’s arm like that; it’s so endearing and heartfelt. It’s like if she lets him go, he may disappear and she couldn’t bear to live with that. They keep blaming themselves for not letting each other be happy, but it’s important and vital for them to not keep dwelling on the past – what’s done is done. All that they can do now is move forward together. I guess it looks like if Lynn and Lincoln can’t let an impossible dream die, then they’re just going to have to make the impossible possible. Aww, I just want to see them lock lips already – it’s been a long time coming! I just really hope that fate - or even worse, Lucy - won’t interfere with their magic moment this time around. This is some amazing build-up and suspense, Hero!