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Rewrite the Stars 4: Final Lineup!
🕑 Added 2023-08-05 17:42:38 +0000 UTCIt ended up being a scary process, but I managed to come up with final designs for the two main characters, Lincoln and Lynn!
Lincoln is now 14 and starting a phase where he wants to feel and act like a grownup. He's trying to act cool, to fit in with his fellow high schoolers. He's also at a DATING age (!!!), which makes him want to camouflage his dorkiness a little. He feels the need to be mature because only by being mature, doing the right thing, and by dating other people, can he quell the impulse to yearn for something he can't have.
At 16, Lynn has doubled her training. She's gained some muscle, which she's proud of, and her skills at soccer have improved drastically. Captain and star player of her school team, she's now known all through Michigan and beyond due to her spectacular performances. She spends every waking minute training, focusing on improving at sports. Maybe by keeping herself busy, she can stop daydreaming about what could have been.
I've also begun writing the script and figuring out how long the comic will be. I'll be sure to update you on the page count as soon as I have it worked out!
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Willy Asaka
Great as always! Lynn seems to bulk up a bit! (Though she might've gained a bit due to depression.)
