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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 45

🕑 Added 2025-02-09 02:41:36 +0000 UTC

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Marilu 15

Donde las de español?

Ashley Uh... Oops

Chapter 5 is so amazing!! I think this is the 5th read through, and I still cry every time. The depth of soul and heart that comes through each page is astonishing! Superb!! Whenever 'Rewrite the Stars' reaches is conclusion, you deserve to have it published as a graphic novel. I honestly would buy 4 of them; 1 to reread myself, 1 to give to my wife so she'll stop reading over my shoulder, 1 to be autographed (if you wanted to) and be displayed, last one to be autographed and put away.

Muze Clark

On another note, may I request not to be included in patron dedications?

Muze Clark

I am now very nervous-cited because "Yay! More story!" But also "he he, these kids are in danger"

UnderratedHero

Thank you so much! And not at all! I still have to figure this out, but there will either be two or three more installments before I finish this story.

David Mullins

I vote for Guess #1.

BRICE MORRIS

Well I have a feeling that your #1 is going to happen but I really hope your #3 guess is the one that will happen

Muze Clark

1. I'm sorry that something forced you to moderate your comments in such a manner regarding other artists. 2. Oh my gosh, I absolutely love this! I needed to come, subscribe, and catch up once I was introduced to this comic and now I'm anxiously waiting with baited breath for the next development. 3. Based on the opening narration from chapter 1, I'm counting on a content ending for Lynn and Linc, I just hope it won't be too bittersweet for everyone. (Also, please don't tell me this chapter is the last planned installment.)

SoulTy

I've seen that one, I'm a fan of the drama of it all

Double Gron

Well they need to make the right decision, it’s not too late. Would they find it in their conscience to be unhappy everyday?

David Mullins

Those are actually pretty good guesses.

Paul Hoon

That’s what I’m hoping as well as the rest of us. But I’m trying to figure out how UnderratedHero would play it out. I mean, what are the options? 1. Lincoln and Lynn run away so they can be together. 2. They give up their love for each other and live miserably ever after. 3. The family accepts their love and lets them be together. I don’t know any other options besides those. Except for the crazy sci-fiction one where Lincoln and Lynn erase their family’s memories of knowing the truth. 🤷‍♂️

David Mullins

That's actually a very good point there, mate.

BRICE MORRIS

Oh please tell us something positive for lynn Jr and Lincoln

UnderratedHero

Oh, I'm ashamed to admit that even though I'm friends with Javi, I haven't really kept up with his comic beyond the first 30 or so pages. Given the nature of his story, I can imagine how we might have run into similar tropes. You know, a frowned-upon relationship that should be kept a secret and everything it entails. I would expect our stories to end up going for different approaches to a similar idea, but it's an honor to be compared to what has to be the most famous and long-running comic in the fandom. Seeing him work tirelessly on his comic inspired me to draw my own.

David Mullins

Yeah, I've seen, read, and heard about that comic. But to be fairly honest, I think I prefer Underrated Hero's comic over Javi's comic. Mostly because it's more romantic and less of something else that is the opposite of romantic.

Mia Roman

“It’s (Not) Your Fault” by Javisuzumiya

Mia Roman

“It’s (Not) Your Fault” by Javisuzumiya

Corey Peters

Yeah. Whatcha talkin bout Mia?

UnderratedHero

Another Loud House comic? Now I'm curious lol Which comic would that be?

Mia Roman

Some people have pointed out *similarities between this comic and a certain other one on a Discord server, and they even imagine that the most painful flashback in the latter will be pretty similar (*Yet so different) to what we have seen here. I didn’t think much of it until reading the very latest developments of these two comics, and it’s actually fascinating in a good way 😮

Double Gron

Lincoln and Lynn has got to understand this whole situation or their friends are gonna notice that they’re not acting like themselves. It’s like they’re thinking that they’re gonna lose their personality and dignity just because they can’t be in a boyfriend/girlfriend relationship, they shouldn’t think that.

Corey Peters

They are hiding in the attic. My guess is Lucy will find them but not stop them or rat them out.

Paul Hoon

You said the next page will be big. You got all of us on the edges of our seats.

UnderratedHero

Welcome to the club lol

Paul Hoon

I'm just really hoping that this story has a good ending with a good payoff.

Darcy lee

And hopefully not in pun

Darcy lee

I think luan said a little to much

UnderratedHero

What do you think?

Darcy lee

I was wondering does lori leni and luna know. Or been told that lynn and lincoln gone all the way?

UnderratedHero

Next page will be pretty big...

Happychap2628

Indeed ^^

Double Gron

Yeah they would never and won’t think about running away from home.

Double Gron

They’ll still do everything to get through to them, no matter what it takes.

Double Gron

I know.

Double Gron

Just keep guessing and thinking what will happen on the next page.

SoulTy

So the one person who doesn't mind is the one who won't speak to Lincoln..ouch.

Happychap2628

At this I don't know what's going to happen next. All I know I can't wait for the next page, the suspense is killing me!

C.E. Zim93

Let's hope everything works out

David Mullins

That's actually a very good point there.

David Mullins

Same.

El Pinche Barry

Ok estaremos pendientes. Por cierto subiste de nuevo la página? Y estamos a la mitad del volumen 5?

UnderratedHero

No de OCs, pero aparecerá un personaje que no creo que nadie se espera

El Pinche Barry

Si el doctor siderakis aventandose por la ventana. Por cierto veremos otros cameos en la historia?

Paul Hoon

Still, this is what I was talking about earlier. They're never going to be the same again. They're never going to look at them the same way again. Even after months, they look at them differently.

UnderratedHero

Yeah, I forgot to add the correct ambient light the first time I posted the page. It's plot-relevant that it happens in the early morning

UnderratedHero

Lincoln's words are not too be taken literally. Lisa didn't think anything like what Lincoln suggested

UnderratedHero

Nah, bueno, tampoco tanto jajajaja

El Pinche Barry

Exacto. Lastima que en esta historia Luna ya tiene pareja hubiera sido una gran interacción entre Luna y el Doctor siderakis en reescribiendo las estrellas

Paul Hoon

Unless there's no love or happiness, there's love but no happiness. There's only so much people can take before enough is enough. Something's gotta give. Something's gotta change. Lincoln and Lynn can't live like this. Look at Lincoln. One of his baby sister's heart is broken, and another is stupid enough to think he'll molest her. At this point, I'm wondering if Lincoln and Lynn even know why they're staying there besides family.

UnderratedHero

Sin Ingenio Infinito quizás no habría Rewrite the Stars. Mi pequeño homenaje a un gran autor y su personaje insignia.

UnderratedHero

She doesn't think Lincoln was going to do something to her. That's Lincoln being frustrated and angry with the whole situation. She was just anxious because she still doesn't know how to act around him. Pretend nothing happened? Say some comforting words? Apologize? Ask him how he's doing? She's overthinking everything and ends up acting anxious. And Lincoln can't stand how much everything changed between them. But at no point did Lisa really think he was going to molest her lmao

I.O. Penner

There's a lot going on here, which makes this exciting. But admittedly, there are a few panels that are just sad to read. Some of the siblings are trying their hardest to understand what caused Lincoln and Lynn to go from brother and sister to boyfriend and girlfriend over time. And what makes it even sadder is no matter how much they try to make sense of the situation, they'll never fully accept it. We see how the psychologist is trying to dissuade Lincoln from the romantic path he is on; how the older sisters are trying to talk sense into Lynn; and the reactions of some of the younger sisters, like Lola, Lisa and Lily. But there will always be that air of disgust, whether it is inadvertent or intentional. And if Lincoln and Lynn do end up running away, I hope Lola comes to regret the way she treated them. It's like Lincoln and Lynn are living in a police state, instead of the Loud house. Big Brother’s got nothing on this type of scenario. And the tension can only build up so much before it ultimately gives way. One other thing I noticed, too: the first time this page was posted, the last panel was much brighter. Now since it was uploaded a second time, the last panel is now darker and set in the early morning. It seems like Lincoln and Lynn might have found a way to finally get some privacy together. Or at least, that’s what I want to believe so badly…

Paul Hoon

That last panel, they break quarantine. I wonder what is planned next?

UnderratedHero

You can't just ditch your family like that lmao

UnderratedHero

The cure is worse than the disease

Thuren Miller

I know the sisters are trying to help Lincoln and Lynn. But at the end of all, it brings more suffering and pain

Paul Hoon

For a genius, she's really stupid to think like that.

Paul Hoon

Months? You had them drag this out for months?! Jesus. I thought they would ditch the family within the first week. How much more misery is there going to be?

Darcy lee

Is Lisa that uncomfortable with lincoln thinking he would really do that. Because his feelings for one sister

Gabriel Corrales

Two siblings dating each other or being with each other is taboo.

David Mullins

Don't worry, I have a straw.

El Pinche Barry

Doctor siderakis! Gracias por hacerle un cameo a este películiar doctor. Ojalá lo pudiéramos ver más al buen doc.

David Mullins

Quick question... What exactly is the taboo?

UnderratedHero

They understand their feelings are real, but they still disapprove. Only Lola doesn't care about the taboo of it

UnderratedHero

They were probably slightly more judgemental about her chances or having a real relationship with Lincoln

UnderratedHero

It's not COVID's quarantine, it just means they weren't allowed to be together alone lol

UnderratedHero

Thank you so much!

UnderratedHero

You better have a straw or something to breathe

UnderratedHero

Weird definition of hope lol And Lily is just trying to understand what Lynn sees in Lincoln to love him like that. But she's still too young and it makes her awkward to thinks about romance, especially between two of her siblings lol

UnderratedHero

They're aware of all the trouble this is causing. That's kinda what the page is about lol

UnderratedHero

They definitely are

UnderratedHero

Kinda hard to simply put the love of your life behind you

Double Gron

I just hope they’ll soon understand that this situation is causing trouble for their family.

Double Gron

If they can’t put their actual boyfriend girlfriend relationship behind them their own friends will notice that something is wrong with them.

SoulTy

Honestly everyone in this house feels like they're walking on eggshells.

C.E. Zim93

Well this is interesting. Hope everything works out for Lincoln and Lynn

Spawn

Seems like there is hope… 😌 But also what’s up with Lilly asking that? 😂

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Oh boy, a new page for the comic! ( One Minute Later ) Man oh man, I wonder what will happen next on the comic. Lincoln and Lynn Jr. were right, everything definitely changed for them and their family. I mean, first it was the Physiologist, even though Lynn Jr and Lincoln didn't need any real help. Next, Lynn Jr gets some home therapy from Lori, Leni, and Luna. And to make things worst, Lola still won't talk to Lincoln because her heart is still broken. Not to mention that Lisa was being a bit distant with Lincoln and Lucy makes some kind of sacred birthday wish on her birthday. Man oh man, I sure hope Lynn Jr and Lincoln are thinking of doing what I hope and thinking what they are going to do because right now, I'm starting to get worried and feeling bad for them. I guess I'll have to wait until next weekend to find out, but until then... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! ( Putting My Head Back In The Sand Until The Next Page Of The Comic Comes Out )

Roberto Soto

This is worth every week to see this amazing piece of art continue gawd I love this so much fr! 😁❤️🧡

Silvester Rodriguez

Looks Like The Loud Sisters Along With Lynn‘s Friend & Lincoln‘s Therapy Trying To Get Through This But At Presidents’ Day They Can’t Go Near Each Other Because It’s Quarantine Of 2020 I Hope This Will Be About To Happen Soon If Not Lynn & Lincoln Has Enough Leave Home Run Away Not Come Back Loud Home Ever Again Until Further Notice.

CipherRage0909

Lynn: "And then we had therapy at home." Luna: "Look, Lynn, we understand how it feels to be in love with someone." Leni places her hand on Lynn's giving it a comforting squeeze. Leni: "Yeah, like, it's totes unbearable. Especially when you're a woman." Lori: "You can't control yourself when you're near the person you love so much."

David Mullins

Same, because that's exactly what I have been saying the entire time.

Youronly_z

Omg! I am so so so glad that everyone is beginning to understand Lincoln and Lynn Jr. It seem that there's still a bit of tension however it's being lifted slowly.