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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 41

🕑 Added 2025-01-13 05:18:37 +0000 UTC

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Mark John Banzon

Bruh. 💀

Mark John Banzon

Damn it's too awkward. 🫥

NOBINHO

Estou muito ansioso para que as as outras páginas serem liberadas para membros que não consseguem pagar a assinatura de 35 como eu kkkkk😅😅😅 não minha assinatura não é muito mais é de coração

Double Gron

All their hearts are sinking 😞🙁.

Darthpyro

Definitely needs to be an alternate page where Lincoln and Lynn do that

Paul Hoon

I'm sorry for making you explain it all. I just don't like misinterpreting things or reading them wrong. And yes, we're excited for what Lucy thinks and how this story pans out.

UnderratedHero

Yes, that's what "you broke my heart" and her tears imply. And her reluctant acceptance of their relationship when she tells him "Everyone wants you to get over it, but I know you won't. I hope you're happy, cause you're my siblings and I love you both". And she keeps bringing up that they all make their choices, and he chose Lynn. Which one could interpret that it's because she chose the family instead of fully going for her feelings. She thought about everyone, Lincoln and Lynn only thought about themselves. That's part of what makes her angry. I really don't like writing all of this down, I would rather have my readers interpret the material with the little clues I throw in the characters dialogue and make their own interpretations. I usually spend about an hour or more picking exactly what they say, cause I don't like giving away everything or having the characters outright say what they're feeling and why they're doing what they do. But everyone keeps asking me to spell it out for them, so that's it. Lola is heartbroken cause her crush loves someone else, she's mad because she thinks Lincoln and Lynn were selfish, but she won't get in their way because she knows how strong a love like that is, and if Lincoln doesn't love her that way, the way he loves Lynn, then she won't try to change him or get them to break up. She's prideful, but she's not cruel and she still loves them as family. All other character arcs will be conveyed through expressions, body language, and dialogue only. And there's 17 pages left, so if someone doesn't know what Lucy thinks right now, they might get a chance to figure it out in a future page.

Paul Hoon

To me it looks like she was making subtle moves towards him, but when the secret come out, she begrudgingly came to terms that they could never be together. Hence her broken heart. Is that right? I’m asking to be sure.

Paul Hoon

I saw all that just like everyone else but that doesn’t my question. Did she come to terms with it and accept they couldn’t be together? As she said she loves him differently?

UnderratedHero

The answer to this is in previous pages, explained through Lola's dialogue and what she reciminated to Lincoln.

Paul Hoon

If Lola is in love with Lincoln, did she come to terms with herself that she and Lincoln couldn’t be together or was she planning on trying to win his heart in secret when she got older?

SoulTy

the tension in the room is thicker than the pizza crust.

Double Gron

Well if anyone doesn’t say anything thing are gonna get worse for them. And I mean for the entire family.

C.E. Zim93

Kissy 😘 faces 😘

C.E. Zim93

Good point. I wonder what's going to be said.🤔

David Mullins

That's actually a very good point there.

UnderratedHero

Yeah, they can sit together, that's the least of everyone's problems.

UnderratedHero

Everyone's lost in their thoughts.

UnderratedHero

What are they gonna do? Kiss in front of everyone? lmao They can sit together

UnderratedHero

At some point, someone has to, otherwise it'd be the most uncomfortable silence ever!

UnderratedHero

Probably. Though they're just sitting next to each other. Nothing weird about it lol

UnderratedHero

Not allowing the two of them to sit next to each other would be escalating things. Are they not allowed to stay close to each other? Seems like a higher imposition. Too confrontational.

UnderratedHero

It's not like they're gonna kiss in front of everyone lol

UnderratedHero

Well, they're gonna have a talk, it's easier to address them together if they're sitting next to each other lol

David Mullins

You and me both, amigo.

C.E. Zim93

Long silence.... Very awkward. And I'm surprised they allowed Lynn and Lincoln to sit next to each other. And Lola is still angry. I know this won't end soon but I hope everyone can at least talk it out.

Jack

Quite surprised they were allowed to sit next to eachother ngl

David Mullins

I gotta admit Underrated Hero, I'm quite surprised by this page. I mean everybody is eating dinner. But yet, for some reason, every Loud is being quiet which I find quite unusual of them. But what really surprised me is that Lincoln and Lynn Jr are still sitting with each other and their parents didn't even bother to separate them. This Pizza Dinner is definitely awkward for them. Wonder what's going to happen next, and I have ding-dang feeling it's probably not going to be good. In the meantime... ( Putting My Head In The Sand Again Until Page 42 Comes Out )

Paul Hoon

I’m surprised they’re letting them sit next to each other. The silence is awkward as hell. They’re going to have to address the elephant in the room and I got a feeling that the parents have come to a decision, haven’t they?

Double Gron

A long silent dinner. I wonder if anyone is going to say something.

Happychap2628

After everything that has happened I'm surprised that they're sitting together, I would of thought that Lynn.Sr and Rita would separate them.

Happychap2628

The show should be called "The Silence House" after everything that's going on.

UniformTrain3

Silence is the new loudest thing in this house. How crazy :0

BRICE MORRIS

Well I just hope Lincoln and Lynn Jr keep fighting for what there hearts tells them that fighting for their relationship and their happiness

I.O. Penner

Understandably so. A homecooked meal is definitely the last thing on Lynn Sr.'s mind.

CipherRage0909

Extremely awkward ass dinner and Lola still looks pissed. But at least they let Lincoln and Lynn sit next to each other. XD

I.O. Penner

Honestly, I'm surprised Rita and Lynn Sr. didn't make Lincoln and Lynn sit apart from each other at the dinner table. And I've got this weird impression Lola may try to start something - she's the only one at the table that doesn't have any trace of awkwardness etched into her face. Call me paranoid, but it feels like Lola's got that air of bad attitude about her right now, that black aura that's usually reserved for Lucy.

BRICE MORRIS

Well I there way I hope they don't stop fighting for there relationships and each other

UnderratedHero

It's a bit harsh, I don't know if they need to be so confrontational right now, but who knows, maybe that's what the only way left

UnderratedHero

Some don't even feel all that hungry

BRICE MORRIS

I hope ither Lynn Jr or Lincoln stars telling there parents and sisters it's time to talk about there relatives with each other and one of them tells them to suck it up and deal with it and say there not brakeing up

UnderratedHero

And this is so hard to convey so I'll just say it lol But it wasn't even supposed to be a Pizza Night. Lynn Sr just couldn't find it in himself to cook a decent meal for his family, so he just ordered something.

UnderratedHero

It's been 29 minutes since the last update LMAO I don't know, what do you think might happen now that we have an opening scene at a silent dinner? lol

I.O. Penner

Pizza Night in the Loud house used to be such a joyous and special occasion. But sadly, this Pizza Night is completely devoid of any excitement. Even in the background, like Thuren Miller mentioned, the family photo from "Picture Perfect" still hangs there on the wall in the living room. But note its distance - you can hardly see it. And it may as well be much farther; a stark reminder of how those good old days seem so far away now.

BRICE MORRIS

So what can we expect in the next page of yours can't wait for it the wait is torcher

Spawn

Its so terrible that none of them can even enjoy the pizza… dang. 😕

UnderratedHero

They went back to their homes. There's not much they can do by staying in their old house for the moment.

UnderratedHero

Memories of a once happy family

Silvester Rodriguez

Pizza Dinner Night & Lynn Lincoln They Eat Well But Everyone Look Fine & Little Worried Not Said A Word On The Day The Incident About Relationships of Lynn and Lincoln. Also Where Is Lori Leni & Luna? Left Home Hours?