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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 40

🕑 Added 2025-01-11 20:40:01 +0000 UTC

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Mark John Banzon

You should it's very entertaining and interesting. 👍

Mark John Banzon

GET OU-! 😭

Mark John Banzon

I'm so sad GEO the hamster died and saw his grave at the right middle of my screen!! 😭

David Mullins

Oooooh, okay. That makes a lot of sense.

UnderratedHero

We've gotten a glimpse of the parents and the sister's initial reactions. Now we'll see how they all deal with it as it sinks in and they have time to think about it.

Thuren Miller

Where’s their Love, their also Sadness and lead to hatred. It pains me to see all this misery and suffering in Loud house. I wonder how they will handle it all.

Double Gron

I’m just saying it might change their lives the way they weren’t expecting.

Paul Hoon

That's true; you are the author and artist. Just bear in mind that once the story ends, it's the payoff that's going to stick with people. Have you ever heard of a fanfiction called "Brother in Shade" ? It's one of the worst Loud House fanfictions out there. It's basically Lincoln suffering depression as he's feeling overshadowed by his sisters' greatness and has nightmares that he'll end up as a hobo. His mother is overbearing for most of the majority of the story and doesn't really turn around until later. It ends horribly. Lincoln doesn't win anything or overcome his depression with strife by proving his worth. It's basically, "Oh well, at least I got my family." That's as lousy of a payoff as it gets because it's no payoff at all. All that buildup leads to nothing. I hear what you're saying, and the journey makes it great. All I'm saying is I hope you got a good payoff in the ending that doesn't leave a bad taste in people's mouths.

UnderratedHero

Hehe, that's exactly what I wanted. A little "Where's Waldo?" minigame. Granted, it wasn't hard or all that interesting, but maybe I'll start putting in little easter eggs to give the pages a bit more re-readability. Take advantage of the medium. I don't know. I don't want to waste too much time adding minor things in the backgrounds that may distract from the story, but it does entertain me to do silly things like this lol

UnderratedHero

For the record, the story is already decided, I'm not changing my plans lol I can only hope you guys find the resolution satisfying and in character for them. Sad or happy, to me it's all about the journey the characters take, and trying to keep their actions consistent with their states of mind.

David Mullins

I'm going to have to agree with Paul on this one.

UnderratedHero

I guess I could tell you, but I think it's more fun for readers to interpret the situation and the characters and reach their own conclusions.

UnderratedHero

It's already changed their lives.

UnderratedHero

Por ahora...

Paul Hoon

I meant later in life, like a time transition of several years later getting married. Just something to make this a happy ending. I don't know how much more sadness and depression we can take.

I.O. Penner

Especially knowing that Lincoln and Lynn have already made love - yeah, there's no way to un-ring that bell.

Juan Carlos Juarez

Se terminó toda la alegría de la familia Loud ? Ojalá y no sea para siempre

I.O. Penner

I saw Charles and Walt, as well. But when you mentioned all pets were in the panel, Hero, I had to play "I Spy" and see them for myself. Come to find, Cliff is sleeping on the roof in the top left corner, and Geo has a little gravesite in the backyard, if one looks close enough. That one shocked and surprised me the most! Poor Geo - he was such a good hamster, living his best life in that clear ball of his. He will be missed.

Double Gron

Come on they’re too young to get married. And they do realize that they’re in the same family. I’m sure that they’ll come up with something fair that won’t make them more upset.

Double Gron

Are they really going to approve their awkward relationship? What if they spend more time with each other than their friends. I’m worried that if they keep this relationship up it might change their lives, and I don’t mean it in a good way 😥🙁.

David Mullins

Oooooh, nice one, Mate.

Paul Hoon

@UnderratedHero No, we want the rest of it to happy. Something where it leads up to a happy ending, like Lynn and Lincoln getting married in secret.

David Mullins

I think maybe the comic should be just, well... something. In other words, I kinda like the comic just the way it is. Besides, I think this comic probably has enough sad parts. I vote that maybe throughout the rest, hopefully Lincoln and Lynn Jr will probably do something that will lead to a happy ending.

David Mullins

Okay, if you say so, Underrated Hero. That makes me feel a bit better.

Spawn

Really love this aerial view of the house, and seeing all the little pets and such. Although I wonder why Leni is going in there with Lana and Lola… and why Lisa is just on the floor bawling her eyes out.., and why Lori is staring at the wall? 😅

UnderratedHero

I tried to search for references but I guess they never did it lol But oh well, the architect inside me can't resist the appeal of a floor plan view.

UnderratedHero

Maybe the family isn't broken yet... Maybe there's a chance...

UnderratedHero

Love gives, and love takes, it'll keep you up in the middle of the night and catch you when you're falling ♪

C.E. Zim93

I just ate lol! Dinner is going to be awkward!

UnderratedHero

Yup, inside Lucy and Lynn's closet. All pets are in the panel :o

UnderratedHero

In a way, the worst has already happened. Now it's just a matter of how they manage to deal with it, what the aftermath of this whole thing turns into. And yeah, for better or worse, things won't ever be the same again. They can't be.

UnderratedHero

Dinner!

UnderratedHero

So you want it to be sad but with a happy last page, or just sad throughout? lol

Paul Hoon

God, I'm really hoping that things get good right around the corner. I think I speak for everyone that I hope that UnderratedHero isn't going to dog us and have the rest of it sad but the last page happy.

C.E. Zim93

Dang this is sad. Not surprising Lincoln heard them. Thin walls. I wonder what's going to happen next.

I.O. Penner

I don't know why the other sisters are surprised Lincoln heard everything - they held their meeting right next to his room and the Loud house walls have always been thin to begin with. Two and two together, girls - the answer was pretty obvious. It's just so sad to see Lincoln in this state of unraveling. Although we did know this was going to happen at one point, still seeing Lincoln and Lynn weather through this storm of uncertainty is hard. The overhead view of the Loud house second floor was also a nice touch. Seeing all the Loud siblings scattered like this just reinforces the real possibility of how these 11 pieces in the overall puzzle of the Loud house may never come back together again the way they used to.

Hootsifer

Is that Walt near where Luan's going downstairs?

Corey Peters

Love hurts

Silvester Rodriguez

Lincoln Thinks Luna Is Right He Didn’t Mean To Hurt Lola Loud Even Loud Parents But Lynn Did Not Treat Him Like A Prize Lincoln Does Not Want To Break This Family Apart For His & Lynn Life As Well.

David Mullins

( Getting My Head Out Of The Sand ) Oh boy, a new page! ( After Reading The Page ) I can't believe it... ( Sniffling In Sadness ) Like you said, Underrated Hero, Broken Hearts lead to... Broken Family... ( Crying In Sadness ) Why? Why? WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 ( Sniffling ) I guess there's only one thing for Lynn Jr and Lincoln to do isn't there?