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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 22

🕑 Added 2024-09-20 15:58:23 +0000 UTC

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Muze Clark

I'm way late saying this, but I think it's especially nice how they defended each other and not themselves.

Mark John Banzon

Agreed

CipherRage0909

It's honestly not what they think it is. Lincoln and Lynn would never do anything to hurt each other like that.

Айхан Гасанов

I think the way they got caught is stupid like really? They were kissing on the street and also they could lie and say that that officer was wrong and get out of the problem I hope they will not be separated because I wanted to see se x between them in their resent bodies

I.O. Penner

On the previous page, in the panel where Lynn buried her face in her hands and Lincoln was hugging himself, it made me think of them bracing for impact once their parents put two and two together. And what an unexpected turn that took! I could just see the gears in Rita’s head turning and turning. And while she may have the some of the pieces, the puzzle she has constructed in her mind paints a completely different picture. At first read, it was quite a shock to see her come to that conclusion. But upon further introspection, I can’t say I blame Rita for making that kind of assumption. This relationship between Lincoln and Lynn has been going on under her and her husband’s noses for over a year – and neither of them noticed. In Rita’s mind, I’m sure she thinks she and Lynn Sr. both failed in their duties as parents. So of course, maternal instinct is going to presume the worst-case scenario and try its damndest to rectify the situation. Unfortunately, I feel once Lincoln and Lynn clear the air and explain that their romantic relationship is not a prank and is indeed real, it’s still not going to offer any kind of comfort to Rita or Lynn Sr. And that is when maternal instinct will turn into drastic measure – something that will only further expand the blast radius of this bombshell and alter the family that much more.

UnderratedHero

The idea is that one of them (Lynn/Lincoln) might be abusing the other. Either by grooming, threatening, or something else. Which is what 99% would assume is going on if two teen siblings are making out in public. That, or a prank of some sorts.

Paul Hoon

Although, if it was yes, then who would be abusing them? The sisters? A coach or teacher? Who?

Jack

Tbh, Rita’s question isn’t really out of left field. It’s a fair question.

Thuren Miller

I hate to say this you too, but I think it's time to tell them the truth. Bottling up your feelings is not healthy

Paul Hoon

We're all dying to know what happens next and when it'll get good again. We know you can't rush these things, but the suspense! Dang 😰

C.E. Zim93

You're doing a great job on the story. Very interesting. Can't wait for more

UnderratedHero

Incredibly uncomfortable! As a writer I try to myself in their shoes and oh boy, can't imagine what would go in my mind in that situation!

C.E. Zim93

Oh my lord. Rita is putting the pieces together. Definitely uncomfortable for everyone

UnderratedHero

They will; they're still their kids and they love them.

Kevin

A fair question. Though I'm surprised they didn't pull them into a separate room to ask that. Not that it would have made a difference in the answer.

Blazzore

Would be nice if Lisa created a new version of her memory eraser device so she can save Lincoln and Lynn from their big trouble. Simply erase Lynn Sr and Rita's memory of the past hours and boom problem solved. Lisa also might erase that canada guard's memory too.

Double Gron

Well I guess so 😕😕

Paul Hoon

Now I’m wondering will Rita and Lynn Sr listen to anything that they say?

Happychap2628

I expected Rita to say something resalable thank that.

Paul Hoon

Abused? Well, that depends on your definition Rita.

Happychap2628

My thoughts exactly.

UnderratedHero

Exacto, sólo está preocupada de que haya algo serio de lo que no se percató.

UnderratedHero

She's a mother learning that two of her kids were making out in public, they're too afraid to speak, she's terrified that one of them might be a victim of abuse.

UnderratedHero

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El Pinche Barry

Una muy interesante página. En mi opinión yo lo llamaría: Aclaraciones para evitar problemas, no sé si ya viene la confesión y quién será el que lo diga? Lisa estara espiando la conversación?