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Rewrite the Stars V || Page 17
🕑 Added 2024-07-24 08:37:03 +0000 UTCWhen the light fades to rain.
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CipherRage0909
Yeah... they're pretty much done for.
Blazzore
Apparently, he never checked their passports and noticed they had the same last name.
Hugo Sanchez
No es broma, llevo unas noches teorizando de como podrían reaccionar
Hugo Sanchez
Underrated... Nos podrías dar una fecha para la siguiente parte? La reacción por lo menos de estos dos padres ante esto🫶
Double Gron
I’m really wondering what will happen next since the cat is now out of the bag 😔😔.
Paul Hoon
Lincoln fought to convince Lynn to give their relationship a shot. Will Lynn not fight to keep it and Lincoln? (Not physically)
Paul Hoon
So, this is why its called "Separation." Now, I'm wondering, is it just the parents separating Lincoln and Lynn, or are they separating themselves from them to be together?
C.E. Zim93
I'm not ready 😭😞
Spawn
Dear Lord, the gall of this Canadian BASTARD…! 😭
TLSM 115
Facts
UnderratedHero
He didn't realize they're related... He thought it was teens being teens
Uni
Ooooooh boy. Things are gonna get messy I feel like
UnderratedHero
They still can't process it
UnderratedHero
Oh, we still have like 40 pages left lol
UnderratedHero
I think she's unable to react, her fight or flight turned into freeze. This isn't something she can punch her way out of...
UnderratedHero
And scene. Time for act II.
UnderratedHero
Big family, thin walls...
UnderratedHero
Se viene una charla demasiado importante
UnderratedHero
You have no idea...
UnderratedHero
No more secrets, there's a big elephant in the room now...
UnderratedHero
😔
UnderratedHero
Get the tissues ready...
UnderratedHero
Oh, absolutely. Lincoln and Lynn are in for a trip that will feel longer than their journey to Scotland. Thank you as always for the kind comments and your analysis.
UnderratedHero
Creo que desde la perspectiva de Lynn y Lincoln está muy difícil reaccionar, ni siquiera para salvarse. Son sus peores pesadillas haciéndose verdad.
UnderratedHero
Muchísimas gracias! Este es el proyecto más ambicioso que he hecho hasta ahora, me alegra que les guste. Mucho drama está al caer, abróchense el cinturón!
UnderratedHero
No te das una idea...
UnderratedHero
The parents are still trying to process what they heard... It's tough. Thank you!
UnderratedHero
They were too shocked to react 😔
Kevin
I was like "ok they could lie their way outta this still. The mountie is probably gonna come back" but to go an tell their parents all of that, BRUH. This guy 😔
Thuren Miller
Things get dark when the lights go out
Thuren Miller
Lynn and Rita are speechless
Uni
And… it’s over 😬
Paul Hoon
Since Lincoln’s crying, I bet Lynn’s reaction is going to get defensive and angry.
Jack
And so the curtain falls 😬
Paul Hoon
Oh boy 🫣 please tell me the sisters don’t find out. Please tell me the parents don’t tell them.
Juan Carlos Juarez
Noooooo, maldición la verdad salió a la luz pobrecito de ambos tanto Lincoln como Lynn 🥺🥺😢
Antn100Q
Things about to get real intense…
Double Gron
Well, it looks like the cat has been out of the bag. I guess they’ll be grounded, and their siblings will be flabbergasted when they hear about this, it’s like spending more time with one another than your family and friends.😔😔🙁
Mia Roman
😱
C.E. Zim93
Oh shit!! That ranger just told on them!! Things are getting intense! I'm interested to see how this goes
I.O. Penner
Damn that Mountie and his big friggin’ mouth. Now of course Lynn Sr. and Rita are going to want to know what Lincoln was doing to his “girlfriend’s” body! Just had to keep kicking them both while they were down, eh? Well, once Lincoln’s extended ban expires after these next three years, I’m sure he’ll still never go back to Canada again. It just breaks my heart that one moment of unbridled passion between Lincoln and Lynn ended up being the thing that did them in. I feel so terrible for Lincoln; his tears say it all. He knows things will never be the same again for him and Lynn now that Lynn Sr. and Rita know what is going on between him and his "girlfriend." So, this is how the dominoes begin to fall. It’s going to be a looooooong drive back and an even looooooonger discussion once Lincoln and Lynn get home.
El Pinche Barry
Chale. Ahora sí los agarraron con la masa. Solamente se salvarían los dos si Lynn jr inventa que se estuvo besando con un chico canadiense y que doblé cita a escondidas
Hugo Sanchez
Dios ahora me dejas con mucha más intriga! La continuación de sus reacciones, las defensas de estos dos, LA REACCIÓN (si es que hay) DE LOS DEMAS, la consecuencia que tendrán ante esto, etc... Underrated, mis diez de diez a todo porque me encanta tu historia de estos dos, las cinco partes son increíbles y un diseño de historia e dibujo perfectos. Drama y suspense 💯
Hugo Sanchez
No me j... Este emoji lo he sentido al ver el: "Lo siento... ¿Que?" De Lynn Sr, creo todos sabemos que el va a ser el que se cabree más que ninguna otra persona...💀
Aztrux
Oye está muy lindo este 🚂. Dejen busco un asiento cómodo que va ponerse turbulento el viaje.
Happychap2628
The look in Rita and Lynn Sr eyes says it all, confusion and shocked. Were as Lincoln and Lynn are just shocked. I swear my heart was beating faster as I read this page, great work man keep it up.
TLSM 115
DAMN just straight up like that I would have bodied him oh I can't wait for next chapter
