Ron512
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My drawing progress
🕑 Added 2023-12-25 17:43:18 +0000 UTCI asked my friend for some advice on what I did wrong, here is the result.
The second image is the original version.

Comments
demichan
hmmm those two in the back look familiar ^.-
Ron512
I will remember for the future, thanks.
sparticus_37
Opinion: you should use a softer shadow gradient across the face, the current one make it look like a really bad/awkward tan