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Eternal dream Chapter 9 Part 2
🕑 Added 2022-10-05 15:20:08 +0000 UTCUnfortunately, this part focuses more on the conversation but I wish you a nice read anyway.
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Ron512
Before publishing the full part, I will correct the errors , thanks
sparticus_37
i'm not normally one to post grammar corrections in comments, but there were alot of glaring issues to me with this chapter p3 "but no longer as it did" ->t "but not as much as it did" p5 "This is not a problem" -> "That won't be a problem" p6 "Even write away" -> "We can start right away" p7 "here it is about your healthy, with this you can not joke" -> "this is about your health, you can't joke around with it" p10 "the main thing here" -> "the good thing here" p14 "And going back to money" ->; "And going back to the issue of money" p23 "besides, precisely" -> "besides, it is precisely" p32 "she'll discover she's pretending" -> "she'll discover I'm pretending"
