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Gift of Hedone: Story Help (Spoilers)

🕑 Added 2024-12-30 22:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Allévoy

its a pleasure try to help with this amazing project ^^

Jiggly Pixels

Thank you for the feedback and suggestion Touta, the idea of a final warning makes sense rather than a super abrupt end. :)

Jiggly Pixels

Thank you as always for your suggestions and feedback, I really like the hooded princess, need to figure that out in the bigger picture, but thank you my friend!

Jiggly Pixels

Really appreciate the feedback Kai, I was thinking a similar thing about an less invasive first meet up, and then a more intimate secondary interaction :) Thank you for taking the time type this and comment

touta konoe

Maybe do it so; When you say no the princess will say that you will really die and that this is the only Option to help. Than you get the choice again with no leeding to the gameover. Also really like the hooded person idea.

Allévoy

as small suggestions: Maybe the princess should be hooded or something and not be recognized in the first instance until a next meeting? and the ways when asking to be saved... perhaps something simpler but intense, that shows that you don't want to die more than having the mysterious hooded woman sitting on your face hahaha

Kai Grimm

I've seen the nursing hand job comment and feel that would work best, maybe after you've agreed you slowly wake up with the taste of her breastmilk in your mouth, then you shyly pull away but she asks that you continue moreso until the healing is complete? Then maybe to "fulfill" the promise lead onto an intimate scene where she gives a blow job then we eat her out before passionate love making maybe?

Jiggly Pixels

All good, appreciate the suggestions 🙂

Jr Paul

Oh dude that’s a great idea

Just_L

Oh sorry maybe a *hesitate* princess:"we don't have much time pls say something" PC:"ok I will do it" ? That could be a bit pushy though so I don't know if that is better 😅

Jiggly Pixels

I really appreciate the honesty and feedback plant bro, the dialogue itself was just a place holder, but that was something I was also a bit concerned about in terms of portraying consent. So thank you for taking the time to comment 🙂

Jiggly Pixels

Whilst that would be cool, and I really appreciate the suggestion it would unfortunately go against the consensual direction of the game

Jiggly Pixels

That's a valid point, thank you for the comment and feedback Bkpr 🙂

Jiggly Pixels

Thank you, glad you enjoy the idea!

Jiggly Pixels

Really appreciate the feedback DIGI!

Jiggly Pixels

Hey L, Thank you for the comment, and that would be pretty funny, however it would go against the consensual direction of the game, but the input is greatly appreciated 😊

Jiggly Pixels

Really appreciate the suggestion, however their "interaction" between one another is a story catalyst

Rickey

What if possible.... To have an alternate scene where you fend off the raid, however you succumb still to your injuries? But I would say make it INSANELY hard or RNG based to do so. Just a thought for a little extra spice for the "hardcore" gamers maybe?

Just_L

I would do a enthusiastic "yes pls!!!!" Kind of option and an option where you hesitate to answer and she then just goes for it to safe you ... Maybe with the second option you get an "you could have died there" later when you are safed

Dr. Wibbert

Even a false negative response could work, e.g. you say "At the cost of my life. I wish not to pervert you, princess." & the princess could just make a royal command he can't refuse & just sit on his face 😂😂

PlantBro

Not sure how it portrays the topic of consent since it's a "do it or else (you die)" scenario. the "even if I perish, I do it happy" sounds to needy the way it's phrased but that might just be me. still really like the game ending if you say no. gives the feel of your choices mattering with tangible consequences + it's funny to me.

PlantBro

Perhaps a nursing handjob scene

Jr Paul

I love the idea of the princess cumming on your face heals you 🤣 that’s amazing I love it 10/10

Bkpr

I think in this case, add some urgency to this encounter. If your village is being raided and you’ve been injured, you’d want to get back on your feet and take the fight to your attackers as soon as you could - this doubles with making the tutorial flow quickly and not feel too drawn-out.

DIGI

I believe her breast milk would be a better option to heal you instead


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