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Elemental Gatherers Book 4 - Chapter One

🕑 Added 2020-07-19 00:50:29 +0000 UTC

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Hi I love the series but I was wondering if you going to work in the rest of the older students, into this chapter or later chapters?

Thanks for pointing that out! I'm more than happy to see typos or weird prose that needs correcting here

Troy Meyers

New here. Sorry if I am doing this wrong...but the 2nd sentence really grates on me. "When it reached his eyes, I woke with a start." ....reached my eyes or he woke with a start

P.R. Bakker

Love the series.

P.R. Bakker

there is an inconsistency in here. In condensation Aiden should especially be careful in veiling his aura in the neighborhood of children who didn't form their center yet. In this chapter that seems to be contradicted.

very good first chapter. I am excited about this series.


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