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EG Monster Island Chapter 30

🕑 Added 2021-08-12 04:13:10 +0000 UTC

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Mark Thorne

If you're doing single matches, then it drops down from 48 to 24 to 12 to 6 to 3. It's not a power of 2, so eventually someone has to have a bye week to get to a final with 2 people.

Awesome! I'll take that into account on the next draft. Might end up stretching the chapter, or making the tournament take three chapters instead of two. This books gonna be huge

Mark Thorne

Hey, Chris--something really felt off about the pacing here. Maybe it's just me, but this chapter felt very rushed compared with the rest of the book. Haven't quite put my finger on it, but figured I'd mention it in case it jumped out at you on a re-read. :) Hope you have a great weekend!

Joseph

I was wondering how 48 contestants didn’t divide into 8 arenas? Seems like 3 rounds of 16? Which makes 48.

DB

For single elimination tournament, needs to be power of 2 number of competitors for an even split - in this case, have to get it down to 32. So 16 got buys in the first round, with 32 competing for the remaining 16 slots.

Tom Richards

When it refers to punching the opponent in the rear, I think rear should be replaced with back because otherwise it sounds like he's punching them in the ass.

Thanks for another great chapter. Looking forward to another one Monday morning.

I nodded, “Yes ma’am, I should have avoided it. He formed it fast enough that I couldn’t without giving up my attack, but I could have still beat him.” He grunted, then turned towards the arena next to me. Ming was fighting an Illyrian. I think it should be "she grunted" since it's Knight Kaminski.

the end of hte whip flicking around. "Hte" should be the. Also i should be upper case in several spots.

Forty eight fighters does divide very evenly you would have 24 fights so with 8 arenas you would have 3 sets.

Stephen Neville

Awesome chapter! I can't wait for the next one.


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