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EG Monster Island Chapter 25

🕑 Added 2021-07-15 03:14:23 +0000 UTC

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Micke Andersson

"Their red coloring seemed to become greenish for a second, making me slightly nauseous to look at." I think the ending there should be more like "from looking at it" or similar.

And now I have to wait for Sunday night for another chapter?! You're killing me! Love it, can't wait to order this one for my collection next!

"Small specks of Fire Aether were occasionally visible in the above us, giving me glimpses of Sia. " I think your missing the word Sky in this sentence.

Tom Richards

They did a fair amount of training with librarian narwan I believe, linking and merging, I think it was mostly in craesti city

Star

Chatper :) Thanks for it - there was a lot happening, but for me it was a bit difficult to track. E.g. I had to read a couple times a part where he lands on Sia to understand it - it was mentioned only that he jumps, and then somewhere in next paragraph I was able to understand that he landed successfully somewhere on Sia. Same with remaining chapter: a lot happening, a lot of he/she/they and I am getting a bit lost. Also, I feel like I am missing a bunch of the info about working/training with Sia - all this merging, connecting to meridians.... does my memory need update so much that I forgot full chapter of detailed training with Sia? If yes, sorry....

Ryan

Can't wait for the book thank you

Ryan

Wow


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