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EG Monster Island Chapter 23

🕑 Added 2021-07-05 15:25:32 +0000 UTC

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David Milligan

comfy,” I pat Lammy on her head. Should this be “patted”

Tom Richards

Loved it, typo with seeme, guessing it should be seemed Never heard it called "ungrateful colonials day" 🤣😂😂

Really like the chapter. Would be cool if they can keep the dungeon sain and use it as a training aid now that they know the rules.

Linda Thompson

Love it, love it…. I was wondering if they’d run into another Dungeon, it seemed like the perfect place for one.

Thomas

Good chapter, don't worry about the delay! Though at the end, where Aiden chastised himself for not thinking of everything (ie Walls), I would have thought that his character development would have him at least recognize when he's putting too much on himself.


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