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EG Monster Island Chapter 20

🕑 Added 2021-06-14 03:58:41 +0000 UTC

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victoria bettley

Really want to see a picture of Sia now he has evolved! Sounds so pretty. Can't wait for him to finish transforming! Small note but I kinda feel like the first thing Aiden would do when he awoke would be to check his new core and level? I know he mentions it when with Sia but I feel like he would investigate it more or benchmark his change somehow? Also kinda feel like they may congratulate each other when they first met again for advancing. Side note, no explanation yet as to why they're is less grime on him but possibly because it'll be explained next chapter? Overall loved the chapter though and interactions.

Good idea!

Also, there has been no previous mention of a "Rainbow" Zarorzel -- e.g. in the books Aiden read in the first book on Zarozel's.

So based on chapter 7 of Condensation I'm guessing Sia is now a Elemental Zarorzel? Since he has more than just Fire and lighting Aether.

If you wanted something for Aiden and Jamila to do for spending time together she could teach him more healing magic since now he should have high enough affinity to learn more healing. (Would be interested to see Aiden learn more healing. He gets hurt alot)

Amazing like always

Another awesome chapter, Glad to see the bond's evolving and that they get to help out in the next event. Only thing I have for edits that isn't already mentioned is "kiss.I" Should be "kiss. I" missing a space.

Tom Richards

Another continuation of a masterpiece ... need to change "AndI" to "And I" just after sia's transformation.

Stephen Caperton

Small editorial issue. He only grabbed one plate but staked plates

Ryan

Another excellent chapter


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