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EG Monster Island Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2021-06-01 03:41:57 +0000 UTC

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Meredyth Fifield

And when Aiden makes the bet to win a slave he worries later that he didn't specify that he would be able to choose which slave. When he gets Sam, no one argues that he should have a choice. If his choice of slave wasn't going to be contested then the worry should be removed later or something. Or the selecting needs to be more complicated to meet expectations.

Meredyth Fifield

Two things. When Aiden went to fight alone in the last chapter she was encouraging him, but then in this chapter she is upset he didn't let her fight too.

If Aiden had half a brain, he would have responded, "a slave of my choice who came on your ship". But he acts so foolish most of the time. They very well may give him a random slave who is near death for whatever reason.

Will do. Yup, it has been slightly more than a year, i'll try to lay out the correct timeline soonish

Thanks for pointing that out!

Captain Skipari said he was only staying for a week so Aiden has probably missed him. Unless he decided to stay an extra couple days to watch the next set of the tournament.

Another question is how long has Aiden been in this world at this point? I'm guessing almost a year but not very sure. You should put his birthday in some where to give us an age increase also could be use full if you do time skips in the future to help us keep track of time.

Micke Andersson

I was wondering the same - and have been a few times, of course the rules have changed a few times, too :) Now, atleast one other team already was higher if I remember the last 2 chapters correctly. Maybe the statement (from Craesti City) is no longer valid? Or the dungeon/island they wanted to enter is no longer relevant. And besides, I miss the rather repeated progress report we used to have. All of a sudden Aiden had 19x expansion already. Nothing about their aether level really, or the detailed training we used to see. It's a .. change .. from what it used to be.

Micke Andersson

Idle idea .. did you consider that if anyone can use their internal pool to create Aether effects .. someone should be able to use a defense of an "absorb" type, and for a technical mind like Cale.. err, Aiden, wouldn't that come naturally? I mean .. even more so than a laser which is merely a focusing effect, shouldn't minimize aether draw really .. Sorry, running off on a tangent here :)

Glad your daughter is OK. Aiden mentioned wanting to advance again before the next trial. However they aren't supposed to advance because if they do they can't do the limited environment talked about in Craesti City. On another note how is there tempering coming? Doesn't seem like that them working on it is mentioned any more. Unless I missed it in a previous chapter. Thanks for another great chapter can't wait for more.

Tom Richards

I'm glad that everything is well with you and yours, these little 'blips' happen in life occasionally. Edit: one edit I'd make is when talking about his laser he states he is nearly ready "to go on it" I personally would rephrase this because it sounds like (to me) as if the laser is a mountable device able to be ridden in that context.

Ryan

Glad to hear she's doing well Can't wait for finished book. Awesome writing

Got bit a few times as a kid. It’s traumatic for sure. Glad she is OK.

John Smith

Life happens. Glad to hear your family is ok. Cool chapter.


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