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Rise of the Living Forge - Chapters 505-506

🕑 Added 2025-08-06 16:00:23 +0000 UTC

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Tom C

TFTC! Talking about dungeon diving like he’s headed for the weekly food shop haha

Ben Bass

TYFTC! I love how Arwin is like, oh, I'll just pop into a dungeon myself and get this somewhat powerful metal and then come back and finish building a soul weapon armor. Poor Wallace, seeing how fast Arwin is progressing and doing everything he can to help and be a part of something that he sees will be great. Also, I am not surprised Roderick is ready, I bet he could go and sit on the Leyline right now and be all set. Poor Two.

Oblivion

People might start getting deliveries just to get a meeting with Ifrit now that he has shown up. I feel like the wealthy of Milten could get really annoying with this lol

Robert Mullins

I want to think Roderick is cool and that 2 is a competent professional who has finally met someone that can really take what he's able to dish out and I felt at first that this is what the narrative wanted me to think too. But the way this chapter handles things completely upends that and instead leaves Roderick untested and 2 floundering and foolish.

Robert Mullins

I always get mixed feelings about the way you handle competence in your stories. This chapter is a good example of why. On the one hand, you have Roderick a fallen paladin who has training in a variety of fields, a lot of time spent doing intelligence work, and free access to very extensive library. So him being good at this is normal for his established charracter. Him even being exceptional at this is well within reason. And that all makes sense. Then we come to 2. Who is the vice leader of what has been portrayed as the most powerful human force outside of the adventurer's guild leadership. Someone who should reasonably be one of the top 10 or 20 most competent and dangerous people in the kingdom whose entire focus is training others for the most dangerous and painful things known to exist in that world. Surely, then this must be an impressive figure that will definitely give Rodrick a chance to show what he's made of, right? And how does he come across? Largely incompetent, incapable of judging others on the matter he should be the most experienced with in the world, and not even knowledgeable on the background information for the entire basis of his own training program that he dedicates a large portion of his time too. Instead of uplifting rodrick and showing his potential he just punches himself in the face over and over again and now the narrative wants us to think rodrick is cool because rodrick wasn't injured by 2 punching himself in the face. I've had similar issues both previously in this story and also often with runebound but I think this chapter is one of the better examples of what I don't like about how you compare your MCs and their friends/subordinates with established Powers of their respective worlds.

NP

Is Arwin about to find out they're running a rescue service instead of food delivery?

Gage Gros

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