Status update - chapter 143 part 2.
🕑 Added 2021-10-30 03:27:29 +0000 UTCHey everyone!
I'm just finishing off the final scene for this chapter, sorry it took a while to complete. The second half got a lot bigger than I originally intended and I had to cut some additional scenes from this one for pacing purposes. I'll wrap it up tomorrow morning, then publish it immediately afterwards.
Speak to you again in a few hours,
Tefler
Comments
Michael56Smith
.28: Yeah, I like your sales pitch,.. they'll have it on sell at Alyssa's space trading station - And on the Halo net too,.. what do you think,.. 10K credits per 1/2 pint? more less? Or significantly less if it's some of the much weaker 'Giant John' spunk,.. i.e. 100 gallons equals around 4 pints in psychic potency,.. maybe Rachel can make some improvements,.. '-) TTFN
Tefler Fan 007
They should promote βJohnβs Juice β to sell to woman in the federation. Itβs an all natural drink that can heal and turn back the hands of time. No artificial ingredients and guaranteed to be effective.π€£ππ
Michael56Smith
.26: ,.. but don't you think that by now, someone in the group would cum up with the notion of storing a few pints of John's magical healing spunk,.. on the ship, in the Raptor,.. on dangerous away missions,.. or maybe, it's like when the girls don't realize the changes that they have gone through until it is pointed out to them (Surprise!),.. perhaps the idea of a pre-emergency supply of John's Juice might be handy to have on hand, might need to be pointed out to them (Surprise! --again!),.. Now maybe Edraele could do it,.. 'cept this time around it was John himself that needed the Healing,.. yuck, I doubt he could swallow that! ;-) TTFN
Michael56Smith
.25: Well done Tef, quite action packed and enjoyable,.. thank you so much! ;-) TTFN
Tefler
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. This one took quite a bit of working out, because there was a bunch of things happening simultaneously and I wanted to put as many of them in danger as possible to give the crew a real challenge! :)
Malcolm Rickarby
That was the best chapter yet for danger and the need for everyone to be involved. Brilliant!
bigdawguw65
Many thianks
Toni117
Love you
TF4EVA
are we there yet?
<3 tef !
Tefler Fan 007
So Tomorrow morning as in Saturday or does he mean Sunday morning? Either way thanks for the update.ππππ
Evan
Woohoo!!!
DemonHunterCole
Hey! Itβs 2 days earlier than normal! Huzzah!!! Edit: My mistake, thought he posted it. Itβs 12:30am for me. But this update is still awesome to hear.
Teun Segers
The update is most appreciated
bjcreek
Thanks for the info! Hope all is going well!
Bigfoot
This is me smiling :D
TF4EVA
great update but now i can't wait for tomorrow! Also please don't lose the cut away scenes - I'm sure they would be fascinating to see in the future. Are we there yet?????
Old Salt
Excellent, thanks for the update
rich ed
Joy. Thank you Tefler
Muledrvr
Cool
Cornbread
yay
Evan
Thank you, Tefler!
AmnChode
W00t!!!
Cjmd224
Looking forward to it
Woot!
Kris
Thanks for the heads up
Joy
Tony
Yay!!!