Status Update - Chapter 102
🕑 Added 2018-04-19 23:38:41 +0000 UTC Hey everyone,I've just completed part 1 of chapter 102 and sent it over to my editors. I'll continue working on part 2 over the next several days and aim to get it completed by about the 25th April.
Thank you to all the people who've been buying copies of the eBooks! I've received a bunch of edits, so I'll try and pencil in some time to go through those, then updated the version on amazon.
I'm in a bit of a quandry about what to do for the next bit of artwork. I've spoken to the artist that did the banner art, but he wants $1200 to do a commission of the Raptor... I've still got lots of individual portraits to do of the cast, but after the award ceremony commission, I'm not sure about using that same guy again. Please let me know if you've seen any great artists that might be suitable to work on ships or portraits of the girls!
After chapter 102 is completed, I might make a start on with eBook 4. I'll have to see what stage of the story I'm up to when I finish part 2. :-)
Cheers
Tefler
Comments
Maybe John and LK are brothers
That is what I think, too.
Usually Tefler will post an update if he is not going to post on the expected day. Maybe he just fell asleep at his computer before pressing enter to upload the story.....lets just wait till he wakes up to go pee........lol
i AGREE tONY
Tony Bates
Nope, but wait we will.....
Jedi Khan
Well, it's about 2am Tefler's time. He has posted as late as 2:30-3am, so he has about another 30 minutes to an hour. Let's wait and see what happens.
Evan
Folks, just remember, the 25th was an estimate. If Tefler is still working to finish the chapter and make it better, then we can all wait patiently! Yes?
Tefler is in England - there it's already the 26th.
Still hope in US CDT
Maybe not for tefler
Kim Biel-Nielsen
Sigh the 25th came and went - F5 - F5 - F5
Frostfyre
Make a mini assembly line to assemble more "boys" for Faye...or maybe the cleaning bots will take over the line to assemble upgraded versions of themselves!
DemonHunterCole
They’ve already seen that from Nexus, so that won’t be new either. But it’s a basic design that Dana can upgrade the hell out of without having to wait for the ship to be built itself.
Donovan Gibson
TFed ripped out all the electronics. Nothing left to store data. :(
It’s his mom. The other proginator was talking about a family reunion.
Evan
I doubt that it’s the gun, simply because of the emotions felt when it was touched. They don’t seem appropriate for a weapon that was on the outside of the vessel... but it could be. I look forward to finding out. :-)
Evan
Robert, the pod might not be that old... and could be from 10,000 years ago... isn’t spacetime a wondrous thing? Wormholes bridge spacetime... no? :-)
LunarLilith
My bet is on the gun.
Muledrvr
Post?
Timbo
Nope. It’s the Legacy gun....
Evan
So, now that we’re approaching the release point, does anyone else think that the Progenitor shell that penetrated the Ashanath vessel contains life? I’m curious as to whether or not my suspicion will turn out to be true.
DemonHunterCole
Data lag?
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
Just checking to see if the site was up...lol
Muledrvr
Data jack?
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
Data Check
oldman64
Have you tried posting an ad at a college or university? There should be a way to get some up and coming artist pulled into your world.
oldman64
Reference artists
DemonHunterCole
As for the disappointing work done by the ceremony artist, have you contacted them to express said disappointment? I mean, if I was them I would appreciate the chance to correct the commission before you slipped my name to your 3000+ followers. Yeah, you’ll have to spend some more time talking to them, but they shouldn’t charge you another penny.
DemonHunterCole
ETA 4 hours 23 minutes.
It probably will be out at midnight GMT which is about 6 hours from now.
Sithy
Counting down the hu0ours huh? Wonder if it's a ego boost that we all want it now not in 10 hours! Lol
Tefler commented 20 hrs ago and said tommorow evening release i am guessing he posted the comment maybe around noon so lets assume he'd need 30-36 hours to post it so atleast 10 more hours to go
Nibbles
Nope it will probably be the 26th where you are. It's 14:44 here and I doubt will see it posted until late tonight or tomorrow morning.
Sindre Bjørnhjell
It's 7AM, I think it's a little early.
Is it time yet?!
I reread the series to date waiting for 102. I'm still surprised how strong the series started for a new writer, and how it just keeps getting better.
David B
Yay! Can’t wait! So addicting!
Awesome!
Tefler
I've written 25k so far, so I'm on track for an evening release tomorrow (25th).
Tomorrow is 25th April.. any update by when we can expect chapter 102 ??
Can't wait!
Dennis Aston
Ooooh now that's art. Don't know why but the others just reminded me of a video game. That can be good but it just doesn't feel right here for some reason.
Grimlakin
What about a dragon fly... See what I did there?
Completely off topic here, but i just had a thought. If Jade can increase her mass to become a dragon, could she decrease it to the size of a fly, so she can spy easily?
Timbo, I agree Euderion is good but I lean toward colourbrand for ships and haneto for character art? IMHO
It already is... check under the commissioned art work tab to find the post
Will the cover art for the third ebook be made available on patreon?
Timbo
Tef, if you manage to get lucky enough to have a shortlist of potential replacment artists, the good ol’ voting thing on here could be a good way of de-risking the decison process a little. The listing above has some good stuff in it - I think I would vote Euderion followed by Jack Felix (or maybe a dead heat... ) so far.....
Servo1969
<a href="https://colourbrand.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://colourbrand.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://euderion.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://euderion.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://belvane.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://belvane.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://haneto.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://haneto.deviantart.com</a> , <a href="https://elianeck.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://elianeck.deviantart.com</a>
Servo1969
Here are some artists-
Iori Daemona Angel
A lot of people have been saying the same things, so I wasn't the only one thinking that!
Hinterlands Man
The award ceremony image was a rip off. Copy paste of a pose and then a hue-adjustment for Jade and Sparks. to make them look different. I would not use that guy again. Keep your money in your pocket until you find someone better.
Speaking of cosplayer, i envisage Alyssa as looking like katopunk from Instagram who is a major steampunk cosplayer and designer. The other girls would be a variation on the theme of course. Just my two bobs worth. Great story Tefler, keep it up.
ZeroCross
Assuming that it's the same guy as the award ceremony, you're not getting your money's worth.
Grimlakin
Tefler, why not reach out to some international cosplayer and see if you could arrange an actual model in that way. Many would be glad to fabricate something to fit your vision for the body armor and such. Not sure if the cost would be a savings or not. But 1200 seems steep currently. When you're making millions in royalties that's a different story.
Iori Daemona Angel
Heya Tefler, this is the artist I used for my own art cover : <a href="https://jackiefelixart.deviantart.com/" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://jackiefelixart.deviantart.com/</a>
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
Jedi, mine is the 27th.
Jedi Khan
Thanks for the update Tefler. Glad to hear that 102 will be out around the 25th, just in time for my birthday! As for the artists...how much did the guy who did the banner art charge you last time? $1200 seems to be much higher than before. Now if he's doing a lot of work for that $1200, then it might be worth it. Depends on how much he has to do. With regards to the portraits of the girls, how about the artist who did Irillith and Tashana? That was a pretty good piece.
George41
What type of style are you looking for for the commissions? Do you want obviously not real all the way up to photo-realistic?
Singh
Definitely not worth the money from the art seen so far - I'd find a new guy.
Timbo
Believe it or not it’s that guy who did the award ceremony. I’d now describe him as can be good, but rather flakey... Maybe the Fool’s Gold work was in the nature of trying to set a hook...
Im currently working on book one of a series of a mythological adventure in ancient ireland and artwork will be a central part of the package. Stuck on whether to take time to draw myself or find an artist. Might be worth the time to learn how to do it myself. I can draw but would need to learn illustration
Find a new guy
morris ridgeway
Thanks.
PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.
Mark, I like those. Boobs are a bit big but they were well done. (the pics...lol)
Mark P
Not a big fan of the 3D artwork but prefer more exaggerated comic book art but these two blondes are what I picture Alyssa and the girls look like: <a href="https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Blonde-Gladiator-736661480" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Blonde-Gladiator-736661480</a>and here she is at Oceanus <a href="https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Barely-There-682875886" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://king-of-tha-dome.deviantart.com/art/Barely-There-682875886</a> . Links are 3D nudity so be careful browsing at work.
Walter Henderson
I read for the writing, not the art.
Hey Tefler, as far as I'm concerned the art has all been fine. Of course it doesn't match up with the images of people and ships your writing has inspired in my mind, I don't think that is a realistic expectation though. Just pick the artists you feel do the best job of bringing the TSM universe to life. I would like to see a fully rendered 3D galactic empire map soon though.
Hey Tefler, I got a guy that's really good. I already made this community post about him awhile back: <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/17569691">https://www.patreon.com/posts/17569691</a> I like him because he keeps things vivid yet abstract, which is useful when people already have their preconceived notions of what things in the story look like.
Wozza
check out this guy <a href="https://felixffds.deviantart.com" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://felixffds.deviantart.com</a> he does some really good portraits for another story I read
Tefler,
Arrowglass
I, for one, am in it for this incredible story. There has to be someone who is a fan who could do you justice on the team and Raptor for a lot less or even the privilege of just being a part of this. I would do it for nothing if I had any talent, but I cannot even do stick figures right. Good luck with your search!!!!
David Kepler
There's a guy on DeviantArt called skinnii3D (<a href="https://skinnii3d.deviantart.com/gallery/)" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://skinnii3d.deviantart.com/gallery/)</a> who's done some great character work for another author I support here. He gets faces right, which is pretty tricky. I think he'd do a great job on the girls.
bigdawguw65
Thanks for the up date . Have to agree that's a pretty steep price & as much as I enjoy the art I think you could find an artist willing to work with you to get there work seen by all your fans .
Hearing the prices you've quoted for the artwork makes me wish I was still doing CGI. His work is decent but $1200 sounds like you're being taken for a ride. Truth is I'm waiting for the story Tefler, as much as I'd like to see the Raptor it can wait until you find a reasonably priced artist
Donovan Gibson
If you can get me a rough 3-view sketch of the Raptor, I can CAD it up and 3D Print it and do some photoshopping of it to give it a background, engine flares and bullet traces. Thanks for the update on 102! I'm looking forward to see how this new influx of characters works out on the Invictus. It must be getting crowded by now! Then again, I suppose Mael'Nerak had several thousand Maliri on the 'Legacy'... But the Invictus is quite a bit smaller than that!
Roethan
Yeah, that seems steep. He up his prices? I'd shop around. Consistency is good but not if you're being blackmailed. Also, has the artist read your work? They get excited enough they might do it for free!
Is the artist who did the image of Alyssa on the Fools Gold available? That one was pretty awesome.
Thanks keep up the great work!
Scott Way
Use someone different for the pictures. Check out deviant art site and see if someone there would he better
Mjk154
T Y Tefler
wildcat 1986
Thanks tefler looking forward to 102
Thanks