Post "Three Square Meals - Chapter 101" by "Tefler "

Dark Storymaker

My apologies for the delay, but this chapter has now been added to the Timeline.

Cody Strong

I wonder if there is any more Nexus parts stored in Tartarus. If any memory crystals are still around it could give John and crew an idea of what Thrall ships are capable of.

Dave2282

Cool post on the energy it takes to completely blow up planets on Digg tonight. <a href="http://digg.com/video/how-much-energy-destroy-planet" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://digg.com/video/how-much-energy-destroy-planet</a> How much energy would it take to completely blow up a planet the size of earth? 2.25 x 1032 joules or about the energy the sun puts out in a week The formula is: 3GM2 5R M= Planet Mass R= Planet radius G= Gravitational constant

Evan

His superior strength only involves his muscles, for the most part. His superior speed involves his muscles, his perception, the firing of his nerves and greatly increased neural activity. The two are not even in the same order of magnitude in terms of the costs in energy. He has trained on using his energy more efficiently, and the girls have been training and cautioned to use their energies more efficiently. For example, Rachel, whose power costs an enormous amount of energy, has been particularly cautioned about using too much energy to do too much healing. This has been documented as recently as the latest chapter. Do they need to work on this more? Yes, probably they do. However, I’m sure it will come up, that they also need to work on increasing the pool of power from which they draw, as well as using the power more efficiently and effectively.

Big ToFu

Question?? If his supervisor strength is a passive ability why isn't his super speed also a passive ability?? Seems kind of balanced wrong. Since the ice, fire or even his thunder also pulls power. Not only that but just his added strength should add to his speed there should be no way he only just have upper body strength no marine would train that way. Can I get some help or is this just a thing not noticed up until now? Also why does no one work on power control they just go full blast all the time. Then end up drained at the end of battles?

Evan

Tefler, two minor items for you, for when you revisit this one to put it into book format. There's a tense change in the middle of the sentence: "Don’t worry about offending me if you decided to turn me down; Rachel will heal you regardless as well as do the health check she mentioned.” You're using the word 'decided' instead of 'decide' and thus going from current tense to past tense and then back to current tense in the same sentence. In the next paragraph, you have: "there doesn’t seem to be any downsides to your offer" and doesn't is singular but downsides is plural, so it should be either "there don't seem to be any downsides to your offer" or "there doesn’t seem to be any downside to your offer" instead.

Jedi Khan

I've been offline for the last week. Any changes from when you first posted the chapter to the final version?

Jedi Khan

Of course, this is assuming anyone on Karron is still alive.

Thank your Tefler for sharing the update on chapter 102..

Dave2282

Wonder if Vulkat organic cybernetic technology will allow Dana to grow a new body for Faye that John can modify

Tefler

I've just finished the FINAL VERSION of chapter 101 and updated the post. Now that eBook 3 is finished, I've started work on chapter 102. I've written about 3k so far.

Tefler

Ah well spotted, thank you!

My guess, going by Tef's own sequence of 101, book 2, ebook 3 then 102, leads me to believe 102 is just being started so will be about 10 days...

Tefler please share the timeline on next chapter..

Evan

Tefler, minor typo: “interrogation room as Green as his men darted anxious glances at one another.” Shouldn’t that be ‘as Green and his men’...?

John enhances the girls by modifying their DNA. Faye is inorganic. She has no DNA. John may not be able to alter or enhance her inorganic structure and systems, as with the living.

You kidding? Being a space scavenger/legal wreck hauler is going to be VERY lucrative right now. Too many wrecks for tied to police so I imagine all types are going after the civilian and military wrecks left between dragon march and terra, with tfed focusing on Olympus and Terra debris fields first to streamline recovery efforts.

What is the timeline for chapter 102??

I am excited. It seems to me that a Dana heavy chapter may be coming. I have had my explosion appetite sated. Now, I want lots of tech.

A few thoughts... The scientist have been at the hidden base for a while, you need a reason to comment on the coffee. Perhaps it is worse now that they are expanding the base? The supplies are low and they have used up the good stuff; the end of the month is always that way... Using the security system DNA records they can determine who worked there and the dates of their visit. This can implicate at least one or two other admirals and quite a few special forces. Isn't it Faye doing the translation of the archives?

Great Chapter as always, but these cliffhangers are killing me. I could be confused, but John and Calara talk about sending schematics to Edraele thru secure comms channel. Irillith was able to have John talk to Charles and stop anyone from listening in, so I'm not sure why they would be concerned with High Command getting any information, and not be able to send something secured. In the same conversation John and Calara decide to help Terran forces liberate the worlds from the Kirrix before heading back to Genthalas, but when he talks to Edraele they are discussing him being back in a week. The timing seems off.

CrazyBastid

Hi Tefler. Just a thought here, but it intrigued me enough to pass it on. I don't want to spoil anything for people here, so I'll send you the details via Literotica private message. Please keep an eye out for it - it's a doozy.

Tefler

Thanks for the great feedback everyone! I'm delighted that you enjoyed the chapter! :-) I thought that adding the little section at the end about the Ashanath would get tongues wagging!

Tefler

I'll check those out, thanks!

LOL, and I've always pronounced the way Balgruf in Skyrim pronounces it: ih-rillith. In fact, to me, Tefler's Irillith will always sound like Lani Minella.

Frostfyre

Did you see the list of edits in Discord? None were deleted.

ncamferd

Somewhat random, but what is the proper pronunciation of Irillith's name? I've been saying it in my head with a long "I", as in eye-rillith, but I'm not sure if that's right

bigdawguw65

I asked a question of Tefler in his post about the notes outline of the Battle . In the notes LK called John "our" whelp having claws to Ailanthia but in story changed it to "the" whelp . Said it flowed better & obviously Ailanthia wasn't his mother & they have been together for 4 thousand years so not his father either . One would think if Jessica was with him , he would allow her to see her son in action , so doubt she is . I think his comments about John & family are more along the lines of the "Royal" we . "Our subjects are our children ", which is silly except in the case of Genghis Khan who pretty much try .

Damian Wright

Survival fallacy? Strength and cunning and persistence bend the odds in your favour, but survival for hundreds of years still requires luck, and quite a bit of it, to survive in situations where you are usually a slave that is used and abused at the will of another that doesn't really care if you survive or not, except inasmuch as you're a trophy to perhaps be valued for just that.

Such a cathartic wrap up to the second battle of Terra. It was great seeing the bad guys get what was coming to them. I predict some more admirals will be clawing their eyes out before Devraux takes over. Seeing Jade reunited with her sisters was the high point of the chapter for me. I bet these 5 Nymphs were also leaders of their own tribes. Probably only the strongest survived to current times. Calara and Edraele are right to be worried, lucky for them BSP isn't looking to exterminate John, but gain an ally against the astral monsters right? Can't wait for the confrontation with John's progen side. I'm sure he'll gain some amazing new powers, maybe a soul forge to construct some tormentors and dominators. Thanks again Tefler. I feel like I read each chapter faster and faster, and then it's right back to withdrawal!

MJHSharkbait365

The scene on the bridge of the destroyer, when Weber is asking how Jade is able to change form into something so powerful. Then pieces of the ship start flying off. I would love for Jehanna so say something along the lines of. All of the Loinesess abilities come from John. He is the one who gives them their abilities. John so freak Weber out, the crushing realization that the Tfed would never be able to creat such powers on their own.

Dennis Banfield

I don’t know, each new girl is a new link in their web/chain, and definitely the weakest. Bringing in so many weak links all at once might drain John, as he tries to strengthen all of them at once. Energy that would be critical for the battle, knowing that the monsters will be going at it with everything they’ve got. On the other hand, maybe increasing the number of girls would increase his total energy pool to draw upon? Only Tefler will tell ;)

MuddMaxx

New question to ponder: Will Jade help John feed these new women for a third time all together so they only have to face the Abyssal Horror once, or will he feed them in the 'normal' way? My money is on the former.

Big Dude

I noticed that too Mr. Heck, but I thought it was a "new plot twist he inserted to see if anyone caught it. I was on the road in listen mode and just got too busy!

Big Dude

The Big Dude says: Another well done chapter Tefler. Thank you for your service!

Tefler, I think this maybe a typo - *Any time,* the brunette replied, reaching out to interlace her fingers with the blonde as John fell into a deep and restful slumber. Are we just finding out that Rachel is a telepath also?

Multiple reasons. One, she was just coming into her telepathy. Two. The Ashana th are the ones that pointed out that there isnt a range and that that is a limitation of her mind’s own making, afterwhich because of John’s unconscious order for her to handle most of the psychic stuff she quickly vanished that ideal and was able to reach near infinite range.

commatoes

Hey Tefler. FYI, Kyle Hill will be doing the next episode of his Youtube show "Because Science" on space battles. It might be worth a watch.

Steve, That just the difference between US & UK English.

Spelling: should "Tactical Map centred" be "Tactical Map centered ". Great chapter.

Just a question: It's been mentioned a few times so far that there is no range to telepathy which is why Alyssa can speak to John and the girls wherever they are but this left me wondering why, in the early chapters, Alyssa was only able to hear John's thoughts up to a certain distance?

Tefler described the TF government as a military oligarchy, rule by the Fleet Admiral as chief executive, and the Admiralty as his executive cabinet officers. There is no legislature and the courts and police functions at the federation level are run by the military. Each planetary government has a local administration under the umbrella of the TF government. There is no civilian oversight or authority above that of the High Command. There is no United Nations or other political authority that can challenge them.

If only our ethics officers could read minds, like Alyssa, they could root out corruption literally over night.

Those Admirals who are guilty of high crimes will be let go, no matter their knowledge, skills and experience. The officers promoted to replace those who resign or are fired will bring new skills or learn on the job -- as all the new naval officers and crews will have to do as they rebuild.

CrazyBastid

There was mention in a recent chapter about a family reunion in regards to John. Does this mean LK is his father? Or did LK find his father on Arcadia and kill him, taking his mother as his own thrall? My curiosity is making cats jealous.

plus a major power boost, not counting the two humans..

i wonder if its small enough to fit in the secondary hanger? I would rather not leave it behind.

Wonder if John might have the control now to improve the body while not or at least not drastically changing the body, thereby eliminating the need for a disguise?

Tefler

Thanks for letting me know! Fixed it. :-)

The Nova's can sterilize the site from orbit, it's the only way to be sure.

If John isn't willing to summon his dark self for fear ofrisk to the girls, then he won't risk talking that might give away what the BSP is facing in cas ethey end up facing a fully progened ship. isn't going to happen till the GEO has put them at least on level terms

Tefler, you've done it again, great chapter. On page 66, *At once, Leader,* the sliver-suited grey replied, his big black eyes glancing at the navigation controls and activating them with a thought. sliver should be silver. :-)

Rachel and John will be enraged to discover that Tartarus is still working with the Rogan's Rot plague as well as other biowarfare.

Tefler raised again the unspoken childhood experience of Alyssa on Karron before she met Sparks. So far, when the Kirrix invasion comes up, no one has mentioned Karron since the TFNN studios were shut down by the High Command. What if the person or persons who abused Alyssa were powerful administrators or owners and they are still on Karron? If the Invictus does liberate the asteroid colony, will that be an opportunity for Alyssa to confront her abusers and achieve a degree of closure with her disturbing past?

I like that Lilyana will be able to salvage Brimorian shield generators from the wreckage of the Kintark fleet prior to proceeding to Trankarran space. John's proposal directs that they take examples of shield generators for capital ships and strike craft, along with design specs, so that the Trankarrans can build and install new shields in Maliri and Trankarran vessels.

John's experience with Jade will allow him to quickly liberate the minds of the four Nymphs to free them from their compulsion to seek and submit to a master. Once their individual personalities emerge and their bodies are strengthened, Jade can lead their training in shape shifting and other skills.

I was touched by the loving solicitude displayed by Sakura toward Jade as she recuperated from her injuries on Tartarus. It was a dimension of her relationship that we had not seen before. I loved it.

Is Lynette, like many in the Admiralty, a xeno-phobe? Is that one reason she is afraid of John? If so, how will she get on with Edraele and the Glowing Queen? How will she react to the challenges posed by the Abandoned? Will she be stiff-necked about the TF receiving tech upgrades below parity with the Maliri and other alliance members? We know less about her than we need to know. Maybe the delux upgrade will appeal to her vanity enough to mollify her angst and keep her on the gravy train, so to speak. I still think it is a bit risky for her to mask her modified appearance from her peers, rather than revealing her physical changes. Discovery of that disguise could have potential negative blow-back and undermine trust in her leadership as Fleet Admiral.

It seems that Jehanna will join the Invictus crew and become a Lioness. Does that mean John's original plan to have her ensconced at TFNN no longer applies? The crew can probably set up production facilities on board that allow her to generate news and video products in which she and John are the editors. With her personality, intelligence, experience and news-savvy, she can become a formidable voice for Hope and change.

How will Dana's design for an assault craft be affected by their acquisition of a Thrall Destroyer? Since the TFed stripped out its original computer and weapons systems, will she be able to infer design and operational specs from her sensitivity to Projenitor tech? Now that they are returning to Maliri space, Dana can apply her unique genius to the goal of closing the tech gap with LK some more.

John and Calara emphasized the potential innovations and upgrades that could be discovered from the Vulkat Archives. We speculated on potential discoveries in previous chapters, but I wonder if Tefler will turn this into an advantage that LK will not anticipate or easily defend against. The organic chemistry, exotic materials/physics, eternity crystal technology and ship-based weapons/mini-missile system open the door for whole new classes of interesting stuff -- maybe even a means to share Pyschic information over time and space. I wonder what it could be that he is hinting at..

Dave2282

This is one of your better chapters, it had a lot of plot development. I wondered if you would have Devereaux pop back up at Tartarus. I like how you are increasingly inserting hints that the BSP might not really be John’s enemy. Hopefully you will have a followup tale that explores progenitor history. How did an all powerful male species evolve with no females? Curious what John will find when he heads into Kirrix space to find Arcadia? Will John find his parents? Will his father be controlling the Kirrix brain class?

cp

I could have sworn that with Jade (the only other nymph in the story so far) she just sat there when her master was dead, and did the whole, "Are you this one's new master?" thing.

doofus67

Since her introduction, Jade has been my favourite Lioness. As a consequence this is my favourite chapter to date (followed by 100 and 60). I was on the edge of my seat as an angry and protective Jade went on the rampage through that base, eviscerating everything in her path and i couldn't stop fidgeting when she was protecting her sisters from that cannon fire. Wow, you know how to get the adrenaline flowing don't you Tef! What a truly wonderful chapter. Thanks

Kim Biel-Nielsen

When is ebook 3 expected?

Kim Biel-Nielsen

You need to update the “status page” it currently says: Status - 16th February: I'm currently working on Chapter 100 of Three Square Meals!

Benj

Astralnet: a network for transmitting electroni data on the astral plane, where the rules of space and time may not apply. This would facilitate the communication between psychic species, particularly the dissemination of schematics. It may also allow Jehanna to send video feeds, while traveling with the crew. Dana may take her inspiration from the psy-shaper which is a machine that receives psychic command. She may be aided by Jehanna when powered up.

Does the Terran Federation have no civil oversights? Even with Deveroux back will there be no questions to be answered to the nation states on earth which seem to be funding Terran Federation? Will the nations not be upset by destruction of Citadel they had built as of rogue elements in TF? Or is that earth is ruled bu an autocratic military federation, I feel review would be right time to clear the human politics.

Hinterlands Man

Also the big threat to the den of criminals in the Admiralty (with a few exceptions) really struck a chord with me and in these days when corrupt officials and other political operatives seem to get away with the most heinous crimes, I loved how this went. Also I’m very relieved you un-killed Lynette. I had about given up hope! Whew...

In the reorganisation of the Terran Federation it would be interesting to know how John would handle loss of devious but experienced administrators.Promotion and demotion of some of the charectors will be interesting.

When Weber is dead mind link established with Nymph's must have broken.Shouldn't the lost connection raise some concern as to how they would behave? In the story they just land up in Invictus with all others. I feel there is scope for improvement.From earlier versions of story I understand in the absence of a compatible male Lenarrians/Nymph's are intelligent and coherent.

Hinterlands Man

Wow, what a great chapter!! I loved how the battle on Ganymede worked out, and you bit off a lot with four new nymphs!! Faye needs to get some Lioness loving, I know John doesn’t want to rush it but Faye probably doesn’t appreciate fish girls and rando 52-year old cripples cutting in line. Is that who Alyssa meant? I loved the way they teased John about making them perky when things were looking so bleak. Calara is probably going to figure out that the other Progenitor is toying with them, in my mind she is at least that perceptive.

Frostfyre

lol, that almost makes sense, since BSP was finally clued in that John had no idea what he was supposed to do, he's just moving the game along. My money is still on a quantum flux cannon, but Tefler proves me wrong most of the time.

Roethan

I liked Jehanna from the very beginning! Especially when they had that picture of her up on the community section.

Kalen Turner

Another great chapter Tefler! I really enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter! I just hope we don't have to wait as long for it!

No corpulent female warbling there...

andrew finlayson

The Link is very good I'll grant you, but its no TSM.

MJHSharkbait365

With only the Malari fleet left and all the focus going into upgrading the Malari fleet to stop the BSP. I guess that makes them the thin blue line.......literally.

Benj

Tef, great job. A few lurking questions: 1. Jade need to embed some protection for her crystal heart (please, no more cracks). 2. Irillith has full access to all tied data, she and Faye must find something. 3. Who says Tfed gets Kintark space? Why not let the Malari take over? 4. I loved the priorities discussion, but they seem to be avoiding the possible diplomatic options. Why not call BSP? Surely they could send a message. Some recon would aid their planning

Tef, you are really good. I know I have said that to you many times but it is so true. Thanks for letting all of us share this journey with you. It's hard to believe that all of this started in Dec of 15 and I am proud to have been with you since then. May many successes come to you and a like amount of happiness. Meanwhile, get back to writing!

Jim lynch

Look on literotica for an amazing story I’ve just finished reading it rivals tefler trust me it blew me away it’s quite long but well worth it . It’s called. The link. By the author DreamCloud Please give it a go.

Agreed.

Oh no! Not finished....But I agree with Tate "It's honestly the best read ever. Even without the sex, TSM is literary gold!"

CJ Mora

Great job, Tefler! I really liked the milder cliffhanger after the last few nail-biters...I can finally get some sleep knowing there's a bow on top of this part of the adventure. Sure, there are still A TON of open issues that need to be dealt with, but for now, a short breather. Whew, everyone made it. Someone pass me a cold one...

Smart wombat

Guess the little grey guys found a soul forge ?

I just finished reading this chapter for the second time and it is GREAT. But now I am already impatient for chapter 102. I think I need a break from the Cliff-hanger endings for a while. Keep up the Fantastic work Tefler.

Dennis Aston

Gauss cannons seem to be a TFed thing. Maliri are all energy based yes?

CrazyBastid

Great job as usual, Tefler. In addition to all the usual bits to be curious about happening next, the thing I'm most looking forward to finding out is what kind of upgrades the new girls are going to get. I'm also curious about what effect John will have on Faye when they finally do the deed - will she be upgraded and if so, how? I suspect you've been drawing the relationship out at least partially so you could figure that out, but ... food for thought. Many great thanks for all your work on this story and inspiring me to work on a few of my own. I salute you.

MJHSharkbait365

Question for the community regarding the AI Tormentor class destroyer. As stated in the story, the original Ganymede AI built the ship based on. Thrall design. Obviously the AI had to use the Terran material on hand. However the ship had Gauss cannons. Did the AI use Gauss cannons because that’s all it had, or did the Tfed get the Gauss cannons design from the AI ship. It doesn’t look like they have improved the design in 200 years. Also this would be the first evidence of thralls using ordenece based weapons. If the Gauss cannon is a thrall design why did Danna not recognize the design,

Crom

Wow. Just wow. Made my day to see this posted.

Kim Biel-Nielsen

As a point of interrest, when did you decide to let the cat live?

Big ToFu

This chapter had me on edge omg. Now that he has so many nymphs on board and his own embedded reporter it's about to be all kinds of fun times. Urgh I can't wait till he meets his dad I just hope he doesn't have some kind of break down.

Cignal

Great chapter. I noticed the following "New house, different rats, but the lesson will be a lot bloodier this time. John will make sure no one ever wants to mess with any of girls ever again...” Shouldn't it be mess with any of his girls ever again...

Tefler

Ah nice one, thanks!

Tefler

Regarding Devereux: I believe Buckingham said she was "shot", heavily implying that Devereux was dead. He wanted to wheel her out for the show trial once the Kintark were dealt with and didn't want to deal with her allies moaning about her capture until then. Charles was duped by his ruse, and therefore informed John that she was dead. Truthfully, she really was like Shrodinger's cat. I had two ways I could go with her storyline, and ultimately decided that it would be more interesting if she was left alive. I intentionally left her plight vague while I made up my mind... ;-)

CJ Mora

"The hyper-accellerated bullet him in the torso"...shouldn't it be "...bullet hit him in the torso"?

Great chapter Tefler. I did not expected cliffhanger in Ashnath Space. You always surprise me by writing different scenes in story.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Welcome to the club Steve! Watch out for some of the Patron's here though, they like to play with the newbies! LOL--all in good fun, though. No Trolls allowed.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Trimtab: It is artistic license...to keep the story moving. If you are a Scy-Fi fan, you know 99% of all space fiction does this.

Another awesome chapter TEFLER!!! Ended with superb cliffhanger "The Legacy"...

MaydaysSin

Well not really, because she isn't a born progenitor and her body is formed by the template of the perfect girl in John's mind.

bigdawguw65

agree...said during the debate that he would want to keep her alive for a big show trial after he won Battle (just goes to show you how deep he was into his fantasy world ) Great idea about the image projector for awhile to cover up such a swift change , there would be a lot of suscpition after Lynton & her betrayal .

Trimtab

Thanks for another great chapter Tefler! I've only got one nagging question that's been bugging me since about chapter 2... I've read a lot of space opera and I'm a total NASA & astronomy nerd. Space is huge. How the heck are ships in your universe getting to Jupiter in 10 minutes when it takes light between 30-60 minutes depending on orbital alignments? FTL in a solar system's gravity well is deadly isn't it? I've been ignoring how "small" your universe feels for artistic purposes and am having great fun. But I am curious if you've thought this out in detail, or if it's just essentially "magic, don't sweat the details" territory?

Tefler

The High Command meeting is set for the following day. It's 9 :30am when the crew go sleep (the Invictus joined the battle of Olympus at 7am).

andrew finlayson

Umm John is due to meet with the Admiralty at 2.00pm, and that is the same time that Helene is due to wake up. Might it not be an idea to move the Admiralty meeting to 3.00pm so that John can be present for both?

MJHSharkbait365

All of us get a huge thrill when we correctly predict anything in the story. Told you Jade would be able to surve the vacuum of space on her own.

MJHSharkbait365

Do not want to be the I told you so guy.......who am I kidding a

MJHSharkbait365

Fantastic chapter Tefler, the break you took in letting you muse have a vacation paid off. It constantly amazes me how you can continue to wrap up, expand and creat new story arcs all at the same time. Your writing is beyond excellent.

GrandPaM

@Mjk154 Nice icon, btw! :-) (not bleeding green for a change myself)

GrandPaM

Loved it! Hey "Devereau is Dead" crowd: PLBTTTTTT!!!!! heh

Frostfyre

except the quantum flux cannon was blasted off the Legacy in orbit around Ashana, this piece was found at the hyperspace boundary of the system...right where BSP's ship was rammed by a Drakkar cruiser moving at top speed.

What if it is an escape capsule or life sustaining stasis module from the progenitor ship?

What a great chapter! What a wonderful story!! Thanks, Tefler. You done it again.

DCM

Great. I got it after the 77th comment! This rocks! I beat the 100th.

Simorthelast

DRAGON JAAAAAADDDDDEEEE!!!!! And (spoiler)! And (other spoiler)!! IM SO KEYED UP FOR 102 ALREADY! Seriously though, another great chapter Tef! Cant wait to see what happens next

Arrowglass

Another tantalizing touch of terror for our imaginations to build on until the next Tefler FIX! The Master again teaches who is in charge!

Steve

Thanks for another awesome chapter Tefler, just found this Patreon site to help support after binge reading the entire series over the past week. You're an amazing author and I am thoroughly addicted now :)

Well, Fuck. I've finished it already :(. How long until the next one?

Amathew2

Fantastic as always, and of course like always, every time you finish a chapter you leave us wanting more.

VycronDyz

It must of been "stealthed" as their sensors would have probably detected wreckage from the Legacy ship. What kind of cylindrical shape object would be hidden from senors? Stop perving on Princesses and get back to writing ;-p

Jedi Khan

That is an interesting idea. I was wondering what exactly that was they found, as it could be anything, even just a big chunk of armor. And it doesn't necessarily have to have come from Mael's ship either. If that is Mael's life pod, as you think, is Mael still inside it? If not, was he ever in it? If he is, then that would rule him out as John's father, since it would be rather hard to be locked in a life pod drifting in space and father a child while on a planet several thousand light-years away, wouldn't it?

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Am I the only one who thinks they just found the life pod of Mael?

VycronDyz

“But you’ve seen how strong that Nymph is! Imagine having four dragons like her at your disposal... not even a Progenitor could stand up to their destructive potential!” - there fixed it ;-p Let BSP deal with five angry Jade Dragons.

Another great chapter! Thanks for all the hard work and dedication. Looking forward to the next one.

Thanks telfer again and again

Leon Shelton

Thanx Tefler, for another great chapter. I should know by now to just read several pages to make it last but there is no way to do that... LOL. Maybe I should go back and start all over again, and by the time I catch up, maybe there will be a chapter or two out that I have not read. Please keep up the great work. Looking forward to the up coming chapters. I also think there might have been some kind of clairvoyant meaning behind his Matriarch's so called lie about the possible living happily ever after because the other will bow to defeat and leave them alone. We shall have to wait and see. Thanx again.

Braw

Could the black cylinder be the Quantum Flux Cannon?It was positioned on the Ashanath built part of the Legacy,so the ship was destroyed but the weapon wasn't.Rather nice of that cruiser captain to find it,now Dana can 'absorb' the schematics and build new ones.

Timtom12

Edit comment: first scene where the 4 nymphs are in the lab. "I’ll be" should be "it'll be". #2 "John will make sure no one ever wants to mess with any of girls ever again..." missing "his"

Hey Tefler, Haven't read the chapter yet, but i'd thought i'd just point something out: If Alyssa is a female progenitor, doesn't that mean that eventually her ears would become pointed like John?

rdady1966

Another great read. Not going to spoil it but the end is AWESOME. Well it doesn't end of course. Great work and looking forward to more exciting chapters. Thanks Tefler.

Loved the Webers sister/ Jades sisters conversation confusion, excellently done

Hmmm, the AI ship happens to be around 200 meters... coincidence.

Alarinnise

Yet another chapter left me craving more, well done Telfer.

Frostfyre

Jehanna was perfect! On second reread and still love her attitude and composure

Excellent chapter, Tefler! Thank you!

Forbsey

Whooo, I won my bet!!!

Anthony Kester

DAMN!!! Now that was one hell of a great chapter Tefler!!! John might have his work cut out for him.

Frostfyre

Another great chapter! Thanks for the twists and turns, it was very satisfying! There are a few edits up on Discord, but not many.

B S

Tef you sir are the cliff hanger master.........Arrrrrrrrgh

Kim Biel-Nielsen

Wonderful chapter - thanks - it’s now 02.21 AM so I will retire for the night.

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

YES! Deveraux is alive!

Qrystof

Fuck me. I need this story to be finished! It's honestly the best read ever. Even without the sex, TSM is literary gold!

Oh god I desperately needed that 3SM fix... Happy that a few more arcs have been closed - I can sleep in peace now! Night John Boy...

oh but excellent, and good to see who survives and who doesn't

Too much skipping, Jade skips up the steps, then Dana skips out of the ready room, one needs changing to something else.

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

*SPOILERS* I'm on page 15 and I can already feel a cliffhanger coming. I really hope the nymph an Jehenna get rescued in this chapter, I really don't want to have to wait for the next chapter to get closure on that part of the story

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

" John will make sure no one ever wants to mess with any of girls ever again...” HIS girls

Mjk154

thanks Tef

Awesome story!!! Only found one typo. You are the best.

Thanks telfer will be a nice read when the kids are in bed :)

Mark Hall

Yay

Tefler

Super, thanks for letting me know. :-)

Tefler

Well spotted, thanks!

Thank you

andrew finlayson

How can I every justify that much killing?” Word should be EVER

Timtom12

Weekend post! Awesome!

Benj

Thanks

Jedi Khan

Wow. I knew there was a reason I woke up early, just didn't know how incredibly well timed it was.

Big ToFu

Omfg yes

Evan

Thank you!

andrew finlayson

New house, different rats, but the lesson will be a lot bloodier this time. John will make sure no one ever wants to mess with any of girls ever again. The word HIS is missing before girls.

13Lokiz

Belle's the best Disney Princess too!

Hallelujah!

Bigfoot

Thank you Tefler!!!!!

OoohRah! locked and loaded and strapping in, got a feelin this gonna be a wild ride! Thanks in advance Tefler!

Thanks Tefler, here's to a great night ahead!

Thanks Tefler. Can't wait to see what happens.

DeltaByte

Bah who needs sleep anyway

Kim Biel-Nielsen

Thanks - you saved the keyboard

Tefler

Sorry it's a bit late, I got dragged out to a kid's birthday party. On the plus side I got to chat to a guy working on the new Star Wars movie, which provided a necessary distraction from the lovely young lady dressed up as Belle the Disney Princess, who was providing the kid's entertainment. :-)

Jared

Nice!!!

Cignal

Thanks Tefler.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Thank you Tefler!

LunarLilith

Yuss!

Timbo

YES!!!! Wonderful to see this long awaited chapter. I’m going to be a completely unsociable bear for the next two hours - thankfully I have a very tolerant wife :-)