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Dark Storymaker's timeline of events
🕑 Added 2017-06-20 22:16:36 +0000 UTC I found this timeline tremendously useful, so I'm going to create a duplicate post here, so that it doesn't get buried in an avalanche of babes on the community tab. :-)Copied from Dark Storymaker's post:
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Hello, all!
I've been greatly enjoying Tefler's stories, and everyone's comments, speculations, and contributions. I'm a logically minded fellow, and so to keep things straight in my head, I've created a timeline with events, actors, locations, times, and such. Rows are color coded for major actors, or whether it's an event, location, or upgrade. Hopefully, it's fairly self-explanatory. I hope some of you find it useful and enlightening. If you have corrections, additions, or questions, please don't hesitate to comment!
Note: There are MAJOR SPOILERS throughout the document. In some cases, before the event actually occurs in the story, because it occurred or was related earlier, chronologically. Be warned. Also, I'm only up to Chapter 64. Updates as I can get to them. Thank you!
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1IuVYDZf4kOOwO_mLg4vOrjS6m8swdGxiAn_KbPjY9_A
Comments
Arthur Bridges
In two different chapters, Ailanthia is described as having light green skin.
Bp Hlpt
This timeline is tremendously useful indeed! Many, many kudos to Dark Storymaker! It's a shame that Dark Storymaker's timeline hasn't been updated since chapter 103. Assuming that the link above automatically gets updated whenever Dark Storymaker's timeline gets updated, I'm eagerly awaiting his updates to this absolutely great document!
Orthen
In fact it is written "Other than her periodic feedings to maintain her youthful vigour, this was yet another startling first.", which implies Ailanthia is not Lenarran, otherwise periodic feedings would not be necessary for her to stay young.
Orthen
Just one note: in line 757, Ch. 79, you wrote "The other Progenitor has a conversation with his matriarch, Ailanthia. She appears to be a Lenarran." I just can't find where that seems to be implied.
Orthen
Fantastic work!
Line 508 you have Sakura third feeding, should be second as Third feeding appears line.
There isa mistake line 86 you Have Sakura, rather than Spark's I believe
Theirs an error at chapter 15, it says thats when John and Sakura first make love but she hasn't been introduced yet.
Master Laurent
Sakura's First Feeding Reference is not correct. is shows chapter 15 and I just looked and she was brought onboard chapter 60
Dark Storymaker
Update: complete to chapter 85.
Dark Storymaker
I changed my mind, and decided to go with the information on the stories posted here, after the "Final" tag is affixed. Complete to Chapter 84.
Dark Storymaker
LOL It's a somewhat awkward name to work into the story.
Wookey
Thanks DS for all your efforts on our collective behalf. Tefler, how about rewarding DS by making a character named DS as Official Chronicler of John Blake's efforts.
Also at the beginning, you refer to Valada as Valaden. :P
One other thing I noticed. Sylmae was Ceraden's eldest daughter, not mate. Had to check chp. 44 to be sure.
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 83. Document now complete, except for continuing updates. (I use Literotica as my reference material, to ensure I use the most solid edited version. Chapter 84 has not been released to Literotica yet.)
Wookey
Champion performance. Gave you due credit in latest ch 84 blog
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 82
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 81
Tefler
Very nice! :-)
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 80.
Dark Storymaker
Another good catch! Thanks!
Dark Storymaker
Holy crap! You're right! Thanks for catching that for me. I'll get that corrected right away.
One thing I saw: Chp. 59: "John makes Faye permission to be the backup Raptor pilot" Should be gives instead of makes, right? or delete 'permission to be'
SpamSpamBacon&Spam
Fantastic effort, well done. Just one thing I noticed reading through, in cell B589 the day counter jumps back from 138 to 128, so everything after is off by 10 days
Wookey
Well done. You will definitely complete pre - Ch 85
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 79
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 78
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 77.
Wookey
Onwards to ch 79 completion pre ch 84
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 76
Wookey
and congrats on ch 76
Dark Storymaker
Update: Complete to Chapter 75.
Wookey
With Tefler having slowed his output, DS might get to ch 80 before ch 84 is released....
Dark Storymaker
Update: Finshed to Chapter 74
Dark Storymaker
Update: Finished to Chapter 73.
Wookey
Thanks on ch 74. At this rate you will catch Ziegler before ch 85
Wookey
Your efforts are inspiring. Mine are paltry when compared.
Dark Storymaker
Update: Finished to Chapter 71.
Dark Storymaker
Update: Finished to Chapter 70. Also note: More information at the beginning of the document about Mael'nerak and also about Jessica Blake
Wookey
Great stuff getting to Ch 70. At this rate you will definitely be up to date by Ch 86. AND get your Tefler Hall of Fame Gold Star!
This is some pretty elaborate stuff, thanks DS!
Wookey
appreciate you hard work. Only 15 chapters to go (again)
Dark Storymaker
Update: Finished to Chapter 67.
Dark Storymaker
A few of us are looking into if Patreon will be supporting donation-unlocked wikis in the future. If so, we might wait for that. If not, we have a placeholder already set up!
Dark Storymaker
I'll make that modification!
Dark Storymaker
Ooh. I like that idea! I might have to do it after I bring the document up to date, though. Thanks!
Morris Crawford
holy crap this is perfect.. i was literally thinking of doing this earlier this weke cause sometimes you want to go re-read a specific scene.. this is like a index/table of contents to help navigate your way around the TSM universe. now all that is needed is a wiki page for this
wonderfull work thanks it will help me a lot
Wookey
JK. are you blaming me for the avalanche of babes and the occasional tiger?
Jedi Khan
Good call on salvaging this post from the "avalanche of babes," Tef. This would have been lost so quickly given the penchant of some members of this community. >.>
Jedi Khan
Um, yeah...I can barely keep track of the number of bodies in an old Clint Eastwood movie or even the Die Hard movies. There is no way I could keep up with John's body count, let alone the body counts of everyone else in the story. lol
Terra_Lupis
I had started on an Encyclopaedia of Characters, Races, Planets and Organisations but it's been at a stand still for a while since everything else has been hectic. If people would like I'm more than willing to put it up on google docs so that everyone can help pitch in.
Big Dude
Excellent Work!! Thorough and Enlightening. Suggestion: For the Reddish orange Events, make them bold lettering to improve readability!
DS, a suggestion: add in what we know about the original Progenitor from the Ashanath and Maliri records, as well as the information about John's mom and her history (which you may not have gotten to yet.) This would be new rows at the top of the timeline, a kind of prehistory before the story starts.
DS - this is amazing and useful. Thank you for all your effort.
Cody Strong
just wow...that is a crazy amount of work
Wookey
Maybe someone could undertake a posting on "TSM Bodycount"? Go through chapters where battles & note number of each species knocked off, along with a running total for each species
bigdawguw65
Sir an amazing job , it's often hard to keep track of all the action & where it falls in the story line but this will be a great help to keep at least me from having any "senior moments" I hope , Many thanks for your hard work & good luck going forth .
Dark Storymaker
*headdesks* I actually have a job, I swear!
Wookey
Well done DS. Only 15 chapters to go..... LOL
