Chapter 79 Status update

I found what I believe is a minor error.....Dropping his facade, John stood straight and tall, calm and confident as he watched his reeling opponent. He glanced down at the -->(blood blue)

Guess the edit has taken longer than expected. I hope we'll see it tomorrow

Posting it today?

Evan

That's great news, Tefler! Thank you!

Tefler

Just a quick update: I finished the rest of the chapter! I've handed part 2 over to my editors, and I'll go back to editing part 1 while they take a look at it. :-)

GrandPaM

"He charged up to the doorway and stared in shock at the biggest Drakkar he’d even seen, the massive creature towering over Ularean, who was lying in a heap on the floor. " should be EVER seen.

Would love to have unedited part 1 anyway. Mostly I tend to ignore grammar & spelling mistakes cos they don't detract from the story. Can't wait....

Tefler

I'll just finish off the first edit to sort out the glaring errors like spelling mistakes etc. Then I'll do more versions as I edit the rest. :-)

keen_FlattendHedgeHog

From jc_continuer? if i could be bothered standing id dance

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

Feed my crazy!!, Yesterday I discovered ch. 21 of Fate of Terra had been released and I've been jonesing for some space, science fiction stuff ever since.

Malthe Mørk Mejlby

What about posting the unedited part 1 so I don't have to wait, I usually don't notice the transition from an edited part 1 to an unedited part 2 unless I'm specifically looking for it.

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Tefler

I finished part 1 of chapter 79 today, wrapping up the second half of the battle for Ashana! I just handed it over to my editors, so hopefully I'll be able to post the first draft here tomorrow. :-)

Jim lynch

Thank you and yes it was a dreadful end to a great concert my heart bleeds for those 22 and all those casualties poor poor children it beggars belief how those animals can do such horrible things.

Tefler

They were very lucky. I'm really glad they're safe.

Jim lynch

Great I need cheering up as I picked my wife and daughter up last night in Manchester luckily they exited the concert early to miss the rush I'm so happy she did

Wookey

Next you will want a line by line update

I applaud this decision Tefler. Maybe someday you'll release the story to us paragraph by paragraph? Looking forward to Tashana's interaction with the Drakkar.

thomas

Wooop

Thank you for not turning a cliffhanger into torture ;) Much obliged!!!

Thanks for giving out the battle asap. Really looking forward to it :-)

Anthony Kester

Tefler already has his Doctorate in teasing his audience.

Lord Winter

And the master of the cliffhanger begins to study the art of teasing his audience. :D

Evan

Best news of the day so far!

Tai

Thank You.

Great work and thanks for being such a good writer.

All of 78 was posted together. Initially the second part was posted unedited.

Sounbds great, I apologize for being rude earlier. My addiction got the better of me

I am still waiting for the rest of chapter 78. Did your editors fall asleep?

Aewsome news Tefler :)

Keep on keepin on. You're doing good.

Youkai-sama

Mmmmm, smexcellent!

Looking forward to reading more of the story.

sounds great man cant wait!