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Chapter 68 preview! (Part 1)

🕑 Added 2017-01-08 23:15:18 +0000 UTC

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rich ed

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GrandPaM

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Dave2282

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Evan

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Terra_Lupis

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Hinterlands Man

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Morningfrost

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GrandPaM

It is nice to post here and then get your biggest fans input. The astral scene in ch.67 was very good but then adding a greater 'epilog' to it in this chapter was awesome. It is interesting to see how adding Sakura increased John's powers or maybe it is just John learning how to tap into the power he already has. It was interesting to see the black goo dissolve with the crystal Alyssium, there should be some interesting theories. Now we have the biggest space battle so far in the story about to happen with the Invictus about to enter the arena. It would be interesting if Faye's increased powers could disable all the capital/command ships at once and then John comes in and gives the ultimatum for a truce or he overloads their cores. Of course a Nova Lance thru the biggest ship would reinforce the point. Even the Kintark is starting to see John as a man of honor.

DCM

After all, he is a Rear Admiral!

DCM

Can John "inter-dick" Lyndon. Stealing a Matriarch?

DCM

It just keeps getting better. Wait, that's what the girls say! You can almost feel their anticipation as well wondering what is next in their amazing lives. Is that fear or excitement?

I imagine Lynton's day will be ruined without John Blake being around. The Kintark are furious with the Terrans so I am thinking she'll be wiped out by the Kintark Forces first.

JCFenton

Not quite the heart-rending cliff like last time (thank God), but definitely excited for the rest of the chapter.

Nekronom

I’m grateful for your decision to post the part immediately. I can live with all cliffhangers because I do know that they are unavoidable. THX!

another great job,their are great writers but your a great story teller too...................

James Lawson

grrrrr

Morningfrost

I really, really want Admiral Lynton's day ruined.

Muledrvr

Ooh.... There's a thought.... Faye, with Irillith's teaching, being able to infiltrate "everybody's" ship computers at the same time..... Gotta LOVE that new server home she has LOL

weird song

Faye could take over computer control of the kintark and traitor terran fleet and just shut down power to everything but life support.

J Amadi

It'd be nice if the Invictus showed up and messed up Ms Lynton's well laid plans..

Nice reference... is she a real girl or not

Jedi Khan

The Invictus is going to miss that, aren't they? Or are they going to drop right into the middle of it all and put on a terrifying display of firepower for all to see?

Jedi Khan

<a href="https://youtu.be/vYyx3CBSO_0" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://youtu.be/vYyx3CBSO_0</a> Now if you had ended the chapter here, I would definitely consider it a cliffhanger.

Muledrvr

Hope they have breakfast finished quickly.... 29 minutes for a blow job and a shower doesn't leave time for much lol

Jedi Khan

<a href="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-B5vCLAoqw" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-B5vCLAoqw</a> My first thought on seeing this post.