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Three Square Meals Ch 62

🕑 Added 2016-11-14 23:56:11 +0000 UTC

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PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Cody: I am thinking a trap set up to kill him and the Invictus...perhaps not the entire fleet. But they are not barganing on the Invictus having the additional upgrades, giving them an unsurmountable tactical advantage in that sector where they are headed.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

I like your thinking Ben.

Benj

I did not expect the link between the assasin cyborg tech and the Malari. It makes sense, but shouldn't Ed know more and could guide John, particularly given her age. Also, Dana should use some of the tech to improve the armor, or at least be decimated by the mesh suit. Might the cyborg brain help Faye? If John can build limbs and organs, why can't he build a full clone body with a cyborg brain for Faye? The progenitors created Jade with a crystal heart. Maybe John could create Faye with a Alyssium brain using some sort of hybrid of the crew's DNA, making her their biological cousin. Just a thought from a fan, not to be taken seriously. It is fun to think about.

Tefler

Thanks guys! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. :-)

Thanks Tefler, I did enjoy reading it, twice already. Your ability to spin an EPIC tale has kept me enthralled. (no pun intended) Looking forward to the next exciting chapter!

Patrick

Better and better. That scene with Maddox went exactly as I thought it would but my dialogue was more like "I'm going to the dragon March either way, but one way involves seeing how much the foot of a rear admiral fits up your ass." Can't wait for where this goes!

Mark Hall

Damnit tefler just when I think someone can't be redeemed you go and redeem them great chapter sir

Muledrvr

Hmmm

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Ok....things are getting interesting.

Muledrvr

Hmm...... Interesting revelations about Sakura(?) was it? I rather thought there was a history behind her. Once again.... We're off on a side trip. I suspect something fishy going on with Lynton. Having "comms problems" due to an attack is awful convenient, given the current situation in the area. And how she addressed John was a red flag, they haven't heeded yet. I think it was an innocuous call for help. We shall see in the coming chapters...

Cody Strong

Thanks for the read

Cody Strong

And they run smack into the main enemy force.

Muledrvr

wooo time to read......

Muledrvr

Dammit. ... I have another hour and a half to drive. ... grr.... Can't wait to read this.

Sindre Bjørnhjell

Yes! Something to read after this waay too exciting round of Chess world championship. :)


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