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Three Square Meals Ch 61

🕑 Added 2016-11-04 22:29:40 +0000 UTC

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Patrick

Oh that never even crossed my mind(about the dragon March bring minor). The last time they were in the dragon March was one of my favorite parts so far. I also don't see a way it can be minor....John usually has rank and reputation on his side, but that won't be the case this time. Shitting down the second AI rebellion will be basically unknown due to the quiet war the federation is trying to make a huge advance in. It has been comms down as the earth admiral said. There could be easily 20 people higher ranked than him there.

DCM

I want to visit Jade's home planet to see what is there now. Okay, and everything else too!

Benj

Great addition, particularly the description of Jade's heart. I am looking forward to hear more about the Assassin and how her backstory links to the sensei. Also a brief update on her boss and the origins of cyborg tech (pirates). He is evil and powerful, but he may contract a bigger nemesis to take out John. My guess is that the Dragon March is going to be minor, because we do not want the crew killing federation troops. So far, it seems like Dragon march, get award, pick up sister, and return to valaden. My guess is the boss assassin will screw up their plans.

DCM

Everyone one of my hunches have turned out wrong. But then, that just makes the story even better.

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Tefler, PLEASE have John get back in touch with Sensei! Last time he saw John he was about to be assassinated.

Mick Peaper

Nice heartwarming read

Patrick

The building of anticipation for Dragon March has been insane.... Absolutely insane. Take your time and make it epic!

Muledrvr

Questions answered, and more raised.... lol Good chapter.

Tefler

Glad to hear you guys liked the chapter. Well done to those of you who guessed who Radiant Alyssa was. :-)

Patrick

Heartwarming! I love how long this story is that it allows chapters like this. It's like watching a really long tv series that fits in a Halloween or Christmas special episode.

Cody Strong

Thx for the read; it was a very satisfying filler

PLRus--Founding member of the TSM F5 club.

Tefler! Thank you for verifying I was right about Alyssa! I Knew it! Loved the chapter. I nice and emotional reprieve from the action of the last two. A great and heart warming read!