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Milk Assassin

I fixed the sentence! THank you! no no no! I get sad when I'm not corrected. Got really disheartened when nobody pointed the text mistake I made like 3 pages ago long after posting it.

Milk Assassin

thanks for letting me know! Not being a teenager anymore makes it harder to judge.

Let's chill my dudes

I agree with Abeille and Wonder!! These pages are amazing with no signs of cringe, and lots of humor! I am back with some grammar help too! In the first panel where they’re on the couch, instead of “uses your whole live energy up” “live” should be replaced with “life”, assuming you meant “life energy” like “life source” or “soul” I always feel so mean writing these posts, but I promise there’s no mal-intent when I write them. I just want to help you the best I can as an early reader, and I know you’ve asked for grammatical help in the past. I love your work so much!! 😩🤭❤️

Wonder

As always thank you for the HH blessing~ I don't think it's cringe either. It's a really well written take on his feelings of isolation. Being a teenager is hard enough, being a cosmic horror teen? That's a whole other of 'nobody understands me!'